PIPER! NOO! YOU KILLED HER!

Great story by the way. loved it. ;-D

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Hi I like this very much is it going to be more I need more soon

The story's pretty good. It gets a little confusing, however, when you keep saying "the woman" or "the man" said something because you don't introduce who it is first. I have to keep figuring it out myself after reading the next sentence...

like it

have you written the next part? whats the title?

I really like it i can't wait for a second part to come out.

heyy!

another gr8 chapter!

U R AWESOME! LOL

2 pipers fightin over chris!

if chris saw that im sure he wood crack up laffin lol x

What great interaction between Evil Chris and Wyatt! Loved their taunting of each other (especially the bit from Chris about getting Wyatt some chocolate "sweetheart"!). Really loved this.

LOVING evil Chris!

LOVE IT

alls i can say is brilliant, i thought all the characters were written exactly like they would be for the show cant wait for any updates which i hope are SOON to come! :D

that was so very inbelevably out of this world good. that was really a very very very very good story. i loved the story line the way you wrote everything was so good too. your a fantastic wrighter. im off to read part two now bye

this so far had been great ill say more in the next chapter review. but i have one thing to say. you should have done that the future piper went back to the moment right before chris took the potion that turned him evil in the first place. then he would have never became evil and he would be alive, and then they could have all saved wyatt together while chris goes back to the future he helped make, but thats just what i would do. then there would be three pipers and she can just say that there about to give him the worng potion, then they would give him the right one. then he would be healed

OMG SUCH A GD STORY! this rocked *sob* sad ending and ohh evil chris!