Very good. Lovely little filler.

Very good story.

Very sad, but sweet in a way, Richie was true to himself, Angie and the rest of their friends were a nice touch. I thought that the visit to the grave was a bit too much of a sumary, rather than a conversation, but it worked. Well done.

Nice hole.

I liked. the emotion was there but not dripping and overly done.

one thing though, Richie saying "mom" so much was really distracting. it was like those kids that say "like" everyother word. everytime i got into it the eighth "mom" in the pargraph drew me out.

but, it was stil good. i liked the strained relationship between all the friends. it was very real and natural feeling.