Funny, cute little story.:)

Wow, this story is very cool. I like how you've transported our characters to a 40s hard-boiled detective novel. Highly original, and the writing works too. Congrats!

That was GREAT! It reminds me of all those ST:TNG episodes where Picard played Detective Hill- this was written brilliantly! I was picturing all of Jack's lines being said in the voice from those film noirs... Excellent fic! :) :) :)

I've been studying Film Noir in media studies and am oh so slightly obsessed with SG1...this fic was Heaven! Absolute perfection, from the voiceover commentary, the character assignment (Sam Femme Fatale, Jack Noir male, Weir the good woman, Lord Apoplauis Rich Jewish bad guy,) the writing..everything! Loved it!

This is good! You should write another story in this world! I caught Murray right away but Brandon took a few minutes. I caught where Hammond is after thinking of Quirk and Belson in the Spenser novels.

that was a cool way to tell the story of his affections for her. lol i kept thinking you would have them all suddenly draged off and introduced to the stargate though. it was good becuase i didnt predict it until she walked in the office and there was very little space left for words lol. if that made any sence. its good.

Absolutely hilarious! Pure genius, fantastic writing, wonderufl idea! It flows very smoothly and ends exactly in the right place. This is definitely going into my favorites.

good chap! Omg That was ... nope have nothin it was ... still looking for a word in the webster online dictionary ... GOT IT It was erm forgot it. Its really long and erm its a word that is a billion times better then amazing yea im blabbing.

Oh you are SO going into my fave author list! Woo, that was so good! Haha great stuff, loved how you included every character.

"I see Black Widow Carter's struck again." - classic!

This was too good.

Oh. My. Gawd. This is an utterly awesome story. And I don't think that just because I have a weakness for old-fashioned cop stories. This totally made my day.

Oh my God! Pure Genious! I loved it, it's so original!

AHAHAHAHA Pure gold! Cracked me up! Well done.

What a fun piece! I loved it!

Too cute! I like it, just wish it were a bit longer.