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Ino‘s last name is Yamanaka

Choji‘s last name is Akimichi

Each chapter is too short and the plot doesn't move along

This story sucks badly this naruto is just stopped I mean I don’t like the original much better but still you could have made him at least less edgy you’ve made him a copy of Sasuke but at least Sasuke remains calm like edgelord man it was alright for a while but it got to the point where it’s just crap even if he is your take on him you could have made him much better I understand the whole being feed up with it all but there are many ways to go about it this is a bad one maybe you should have tried to go little edgy cool calm and smart just make him I mean shit the whole I’m getting angry real fast because someone interrupted him makes him just unbearable

If you're alive and can see this, please post more stories where Naruto has no pairings. So many good fics where Naruto works best alone ruined by him suddenly developing feelings for someone who either turns him into some forgiving person or holds him back

You're making Naruto a bit too aggressive. Lack of motivation honestly made me think of apathetic, dark Naruto who just wants freedom and doesn't care about konoha or anyone in it. I honestly imagined that he would simply be overall uncaring. But the way you make Naruto seems like he's planning to destroy konoha. He is supposed to be a chaotic neutral bit you're making him teeter towards lawful evil. It's a very good story that I'm enjoying so far

That was an awesome read! Too bad it's not completed :(

This is so good please continue. Love his luck_

I'm so happy that we won't have any pairing .. I myself am a big fan of NaruSasu SasuNaru but I'm tired of good fanfiction ruined by a fucking pairing ..

Thank you so much .

The last sentence was amusing. I imagined a short kid holding a huge milk container whilst laughing wickedly at his plans.

Why

very good

Such a great story but sad that you stopped. Does Naruto leave the village as a free man or as a rogue ninja because Naruto technically didnt finish the exam. Well thanks for the good read.

You need to work on your spelling of your words and sentence structure...

Plz update it