Reviews for The Change of the Life |
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![]() ![]() Sir are you retarted |
![]() ![]() ![]() More! Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this plz update soon i actually hope Alex will turn dark but won't befriend Malfoy I'm tired of dark Harry fanfiction where he always befriends Malfoy I hope for a pairing between him and any girl as long as its not Hermione or Ginny and I'd like it better if the girl is dark. But it's your story not mine. do what you want. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this plz update soon I actually hope Alex will turn dark but won't befriend Malfoy I'm tired of dark Harry fanfiction where he ι ℓονє τнιѕ ρℓz υρατє ѕοοи ι αϲτυαℓℓγ нορє αℓєϰ ωιℓℓ τυяи αяκ ϐυτ ωοи'τ ϐєᏐяιєи мαℓᏐογ ι'м τιяє οᏐ αяκ нαяяγ ᏐαиᏐιϲτιοи ωнєяє нє αℓωαγѕ ϐєᏐяιєиѕ мαℓᏐογ. ι нορє Ꮠοя α ραιяιиg ϐєτωєєи нιм αи αиγ gιяℓ αѕ ℓοиg αѕ ιτѕ иοτ нєямιοиє οя gιииγ αи ι' ℓικє ιτ ϐєττєя ιᏐ τнє gιяℓ ιѕ αяκ. ϐυτ ιτ'ѕ γουя ѕτοяγ иοτ мιиє. ο ωнατ γου ωαиτ. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you update soon.. this is really interesting |
![]() ![]() hey- nice story. love the plot, not the grammar. did you re-read after you finished? sorry if that's offensive, it really is an excellent story, you just need to fix some grammar/spelling mistakes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this about 5 times now, and I must say I really wish for you to continue with this. If you are looking for some ideas then you could have Harry meddling in the chamber and in the library working on his grades and his new persona. You could also introduce harry to Voldemort in a similar fashion to how Harry met Voldemort in "Twist in Destiny". Read to get some ideas it should be in the first or second chapter. But it is absolutely fine if you choose not to continue the story. |
![]() ![]() UPDATE. UPDATE. It's been ten years and I'm liking this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should put this up for adoption. There is a good bass here for a future writer to take it were they want to. |
![]() ![]() l like see new chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm... |
![]() ![]() Please continue also alex-harry should be friends with malfoy and tell snape the truth |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This is so amazingly good! Keep on writing mate! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |