you must be really unhappy to have a self insert like this

just what the heck! I don't get it! is he going to cheat on her wife or what? this is rediculous!

I got lost

Hey, I know this story hasn't been updated in a few years now but I write this review hoping that it will give you some sort of motivation or muse to continue it. This is so different from every other GohanxVidel fan fiction I've ever read. Refreshingly so. I'm really enjoying it! I loved how Goten stepped in haha.

Can't wait to read more if you ever end up writing more.

Kudos until then

TwilightxTanzie

this story is actually interesting i know you havent updated in a while but i hope you get back to it soon

I really have enjoyed this story and I keep checking back hoping you have written more, so please update! Don't leave us hanging anymore :P

WHY IS THIS NOT FINISHED? DX

You really should continue. Great plot and stuffz. Definitely different from other Gh/Vi stories I've read.

This story is wonderful! It's a shame you stoped writing it.

hahaha poor gohan

update soon

why did you stop writing this story..it's so refreshing and different from most of the usual videl and gohan stories..

I didnt know that you had uploaded a new chapter to this story. I am very amazed!

I hope that you update soon.

ITs been 2 yrs since then.

Lol.

I really love this story and hope that it becomes complete soon. I would love that!

Oh my gosh!

I love this fic!

It's so interesting and detailed.

Can't wait to see what happens between Kiara [does sound like an animal, people are right P] and Videl.

Please update.

~Rhen-chan

WOW! I LOVED YOUR STORY! i want to know what happens next! please write more and update soon!

i've read this whole story and i really love it.

i know you haven't updated in a while but who cares!

as long as yu do update!

this story is too good to not continue it.

olz p,zplz i am begging you to finish this story. it's make me super happy if you do.

Absoloutly LOVED the story by the way. Most original story i've read in a long time. thanks for the great story. it really put me in a good mood.

I. Love. Goten.

This was the very first time that I've ever read a fanfic that made me laugh so hard my face was red and I swore to the drunken Dende himself that I was gonna die of laughter! Pheewe!

That was GREAT! Absolutely hilarious! You kept me at the edge of my seat with these last two chapters! Goten is now my new found hero! Hahaha!

Well, as much as I hope that this will be updated, I have my doubts because it's been so long. You're a great author, though, so do keep up the good work!

~LGT