Meu Deus! Que demais sua fic! Eu tenho um probleminha com estórias de angustia. Eu tenho que checar primeiro se tem final e se o final é positivo, por que se não eu me proibo de ler! Kkkkk... Juro! Teve uma fic que li muito maravilhosa mas no final Draco e Harry morriam! Jesus, foi uma das melhores fics que já li na vida e olha que eu estou aqui a quase vinte anos lendo sempre que posso uma estória atrás da outra, mas o final foi tão foda que me devastou, até pela forma que foi escrito, parecia um poema, quase desenhado como uma obra de arte, até hoje lembro e tenho que desviar da bad por isso! Bom, a sua fic é maravilhosa, doce, perfeita, carregada, intensa e tem a nota perfeita de superação e amor! É incrivel! Amei e sua preocupação com os leitores e seus esclarecimentos, achei muito fofo, mas te digo que vc é especial, por deixar as pessoas a vontade com sua obra e ser tão compreensiva! Obrigada por se mostrar tão mágica como sua fic! Os diálogos, os cenários, o enredo, tudo realmente perfeito! Gratidão eterna por essa lição em formato de fic! Vou suspirar açúcar felizmente por isso!

Great story

Loved watching the boys grow up together

Keep writing as life allows

So I have been reading H/D stories for years. You started off writing this very well. I did not enjoy you giving options to vote for outcomes, nor telling what happens later. If you write angst don't give up the happy ending halfway through the story. I thought your writing at the beginning was better than ending chapters. You almost put to much details rather than get to the plot if the story, to the point I skip sections. Also writing a slash scene for their current age seemed a little inappropriate. The basis of the story was well done. The plot is good. There are times I am just hooked. I have enjoyed reading this otherwise I would have just left days ago.

Lovely story! I'm very invested in the plot. However, this is not how four year olds talk.

WOW!

This is the sweetest thing I ever started reading, it's cute and wholesome, and makes my heart happy

Dumbledore is just as guilty as the Dursleys because he was the one who placed Harry with the Dursleys despite being told what kind of people they are and what they would do to Harry. Thus Albus is an accessory to the fact. And quite frankly The rapist should die for what they have done. In fact, in ancient times the penalty for a rapist was death but sadly too many don't even know this because they don't learn from history or fools leave that information out of the history books. Heck, even the Bible mentions this. In fact, there are a few nations even to this day that practice the execution of rapists. Those nations are in the middle east or what is refused to as the Nations of mention in the Bible.

"AARRRGHH!" Malfoy woke with a start, sweat covering his whole body.
A dream - no a fucking nightmare! - like he'd never had before!
Fancying Potter! SHAGGING POTTER! He needed to owl his mother and organise a mind healer to meet him in Hogsmead this coming weekend. Fortunately it was only two days, but still.
He briefly considered if some potion or a substance had been slipped to him at dinner? Unlikely as the house elves would never allow it. He knew better than to ask Snape for any assistance. Chalk it up to experience and NEVER tell his father was best way to go.

Despite multiple sessions with various mind healers, Malfoy could not throw off the recurring dreams until end of school year.
He'd ended up a nervous wreak as even Pomfrey's dreamless sleep potions refused to work. They were vivid, detailed, varied and oh so bloody realistic!
He was listless, hardly slept and failed half his end of year exams. It had taken most of his father's influence, calling in multiple favours and a fifty thousand galleon contribution to the schools muggleborn education fund to keep him with his year mates. Having to repeat a year would mean so much loss of face, as to be fatal in Slytherin political circles.
That rage in his father's face - and him snapping his cane in half - when stood in headmaster's office as Dumbledore exceeding politely suggested that muggle fund donation, would never leave him. IF this continued next year, he'd find himself at Durmstrang before christmas.

As it was he expected extreme punishments from father during two month summer holidays. And of course Lucius Malfoy's punishments were nothing to laugh at. While nowhere near as pain inducing or sadistic as his aunt's famous rages, the prospect of facing those subtle paternal tortures made his blood run cold.
It was ALL POTTER'S FAULT! But the Gryffindor had ignored him since before that first dream. He couldn't imagine that stinking scarhead keeping silent if he had been involved? Mudblood bitch Granger wouldn't break the rules like that and Weasel was too stupid to accomplish anything so subtle.

Draco's problems disappeared during July and August at Malfoy Manor, but returned with avengeance after arriving back at Hogwarts. He was packed off to the Scandinavian school before beginning of October. Lack of rest, disorientation and nerves caused him to vomit on arrival by portkey. That had been quite an ominous start to his new placement at the institute. It didn't get terribly better.

It took a further eight months to become free of those accursed dreams of being with Potter, kissing Potter, marrying Potter, HAVING POTTER'S BABIES and afterwards he never worked out where these perverse visions came from?
He had a very mediocre academic career at Durmstrang's and left England for good after he graduated. The humiliation of bumping into any of his former Hogwart's schoolmates coloring his choice. His going bald at twenty didn't help matters - he put that down to stress of his father being chucked in Azkban and losing more than three quarters of Malfoy fortune to fines. Living in Austria he found some success as an exotic potions and powders trader. He never had any desire to marry, as any sexual contact with others made him picture Potter's face as they were in throws of passion. Those green eyes filled with potent list! Eep! And of course those visions were worse when he COULDN'T see Potter's face.

Voldemort's feeble attempt to return in 2041 was crushed by The Order of the Eternal Phoenix and Dumbledore's Legacy muggleborn group's Horcrux neutralizers. Harry Potter's soul fragment having been removed years earlier at St. Mungo's under supervision of Hermione Granger-Weasley and her daughter Rose Longbottom.
Harry frying the so called Dark Lord with a Muggle thermal lance was a final insult to Tom. As he turned it on Riddle's limbless body, it was rumoured the screams could be heard from outside the Shrieking Shack to other side of Hogwarts.

Draco Malfoy passed away from a particularly nasty strain of dragon pox in his ninety third year. Bald, wrinkled, bent and with sunken features, his remains could've been mistaken for a very tall house elf. Only two extremely distant relatives attended his funeral, and then that was mainly to see if he'd left any gold. It was not to be, as what little he owned was eaten up by providing him with medical care in those last few years.

(Fred and George's replacement of Draco's haircream with one of their more potent products was never detected. They smirked for weeks when the blonde ferret unknowingly packed up two full tubs when he left for Durmstrang!
It was only revealed in 2136 at reading of the late Fred's will. Their nine hundred relatives and friends filling the Brighton & Hove Quidditch stadium pissed themselves laughing for almost an hour! Harry had to be taken to New St. Mungo's for the strain on his elderly chest, but recovered in a couple of days. For generations to come wizards, witch's & even muggles would go out of their way to taunt a large portrait of Lucius and his son, which still hung in a quite corner of the Ministry atrium. Icing on cake of this would often be portrait Draco hurling insults back or breaking down in hysterical sobbing - which incited portrait Lucius to smack him upside the head!)
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this is really good my dude

Aww. "Baby's" so cute... Draco too.

I never really noticed this before, but if you had any scene breaks to say that it was a different P. o. F or scene change, they're gone. might've deleted them... True ly loved this story... Spent around 12 hours just looking for it. Love it

Amazing book, holy shit I loved it you're talented xo

It took me 1 week to gather courage to click on this story.
5 days to read all the other story's I had in line first.
2 weeks to read the whole thing.
And now... This story is just so perfect. I don't usually read scary stuff. This story is so sad. My BFF was raped and traumatized, so she can relate. She also ships Drarry so, I want to share this with her. You are an amazing writer.

I do think that Vernon got what he needed. I love how Draco changed Dudly to look more look more like Lily. This story is a bit like Beauty and the Beast, If you have the original story. You have to compare it right though.

Since you've been focused on Draco/Harry we can make an inference that sev and Remus are in the background working it out on their own. It was good that you did sort of dedicated this chapter to them though. You're a great writer.