It was a good story. Just wish it was finished. It truly drew a person in. If you ever would allow another to finish the story. Let me know. For I would love to finish reading it

this fic was a blast! thanks mate

Although it's never going to be completed, I just have to say that it was amazing because it was! I don't think it was a ridiculous story idea, just really creative! I'm sad you guys won't ever complete it, not to mention it was left on a cliffhanger, but I enjoyed everything I was able to read!

This chapter made me all happy and stuff... even tho Zoro got injured :(
But there was a confession, and cute kisses! :)

Okie, but those girls from the beginning are getting on my nerves and they appeared for less than a minute : And that Kizuma guy annoys me :(

SO CUTE! Also, now I wanna play Hide n Seek :3

I feel like Zoro won't be happy about the surprise party... but now Robin has me all confuzzled and what not. Like, how did she got Shanks' hat when he clearly already gave it to Luffy? Was it when she (possibly) killed his parents and then took the hat from him? Like I'm hella confused about the past, but the present is cute and fluffy so I guess it's okie for now :3

Is Luffy not a human or something? Cuz I'm confuzzled now that the roof scene happened...

So... Zoro and Robin both work for Crocodile, but they don't know that each other works for him? And... I hope I'm wrong, but Robin didn't kill Luffy's parents... right? RIGHT?

...What? Dead? Now I'm hella confused, but I'm obviously gonna continue reading! Not only cuz I wanna know, but because this story is actually genuinely amazing :D

FRIDAY NIGHT WAS OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE PART OF THE STORY! Zoro kissed Luffy... WILLINGLY! And the cuddling was kinda really adorable and I squealed a lot!

Cute and fluffy and cute and adorable and I love it!

I wasn't prepared for the kiss, and even tho it came from Luffy having a nightmare, I was so happy and excited! I really love this story :D

I really like this story! It's amazing so far :)

Thanks for taking the time to write all that out and give us closure to the story. It was great of you to do so. Most people just leave readers hanging.