I like it! It's cute! And it's different! this definitely goes in my faves!

Heh the girls in Naruto get paired with everyone, though I'm bad with crack pairing too. I really like this, alot. Very sweet.

That was really good. It sounded just like Chouji. *sighs* If only there was more ChoHina fics out there.

LOVE IT! Chouji and Hinata are cute together.

I liked the story. It wasn't love but it was really sweet. Like ice cream. Good job.

(claps) Wow, that was very good! This was very very well-written; I love your style. You did an excellent job keeping them in character. Keep it up!

loved it, first of it's kind (in my case) x3

ino has competion lol!~

creative, cute and well done. I liked it very much.

This was so cute! I loved it. I got a picture of Chouji and well I looked at it and then I thought about Hinata and read this fanfic. It's awesome and so adorable. : ) sadly it's the only one but I think you've inspired me to write one. Good Job!

Very well done. I love the good grammar and spelling, and I give you props for creativity. I have a soft spot for odd pairings- this one's going into my favs. _

One minor spelling error, I think...but I'm not as familiar with this series as might be ideal. Chakra? Charka? I'm not sure! *blush*

Excellent one-shot. Short, yet very descriptive. I especially like how he handled being fat, as though it was a fact of life, rather than as some sort of dangerous disease.

Having her show up in the hospital makes everything come full-circle very neatly. Another excellent fic. :-)

hm...this is a cute sort of story. I like it. won't go on my favs, but I still like it.

Nicely written. :) I really liked it. It's not too gushy, not overly sentimental and romantic, nor is it completely cold. And it's largely in character.

Points for good grammar, spelling and punctuation too (which is rarer than you think).

I wouldn't say it's brilliant or daringly-innovative (except for the new pairing concept), but it's not bad at all. A solid fanfic.

this is a very straightforward, honest piece. I liked how you wrote it. Absolutely great!

I think it's cute. Really! And i think this is the first time I've read a fic on Chouji liking Hinata. Anyways, good job! :)