i love the ending, u portray them as close as i can think in an ooc, great character development :D

Okay, so what if this is four years late. This is still one of the greatest fanfics eva. AN INSTANT CLASSIC I SAY!

I absolutely loved this, (I keep hearing Yuki Kajiura's Winter all night xDD), really, you did a great job without falling in clichés and OOC (at least I didn't notice if you did x3) and the best is that you wrote a happy ending (sometimes so much angst and death is boring you know...) I'll fav this story :D!

I liked the ending. It's a happy one for them and it fits well with the tone of the story. If Seishirou had said the words it wouldn't have fit as well . . . seemed more tacked on for happy-endings'-sake. I like this one. Good story.

Livi

this is the second time i've read through this story, and i still love it to pieces _ I just love it! the way you do seishiro's character, and the way he admits his love, but keep him in complete character. and i love the ending, because it's happy but not unrealistic.

Seishirou's attempts to find a definition of love that makes sense are so endearing. He's so sweet...*sigh*

Thanks for the great story.

I like how you managed to make the grandmother seem finally like a human being and told of Seishirou's days lost in his madness at the same time. Very well done.

I've never tried to explain this pairing to non-fans. My explanation would probably be to shove the mangas into their faces...a verbal explanation would only be a re-telling of the the two manga series anyway. ;-)

So sweet...but shouldn't Subaru at least leave a note for Seishirou telling him where he is going and that he'll be back?

That must have been a painful epiphany for Subaru. You described his confused feelings and repressed anger so beautifully.

It would be simply Subaru's luck to walk into the one town he'd rather not be in...hopefully it will let him heal the wounds in his heart.

So, the Sumeragi want their heir back? That promises to bring troubble with it...

A very interesting developement. Their conversation was so very true to their characters and highlighted the differences between them, how very much they are the opposite of each other.

Hm, it seemed like Seishirou was jealous there in the beginning of the chapter. Good for him. *grin*

I loved Subaru's confusion when he woke up. You describe his feelings very well.

I don't think there was anything wrong with the last scene...it was an abrupt change from the former flow of the story, but that's only to be expected, when you take the story from the inner world of a character to the outer world(...I hope you get what I mean).

On to the next chapter(because, really, who needs sleep anyway?)...

I LOVE it!