wow! That's such a good story!

Hm...I didn't really like the last sentence, but everything else was beautiful. Ryan's hurt over Seth not remembering was adorable. What exactly did happen? I got the impression that Ryan gave him a bj, but everything else was kind of unclear. Oh well. I'll go read the sequel, maybe there are some answers there, yeah?

this was FANTASTIC!

i'm so in love!

*kisses author*

going right to my fav. list!

i threw up in my mouth

not only was this gross but it was dumb

they are not gay

I read this story a while ago and I thought the imagery was really great, but I lost it... and I just rediscovered it! I'm going to favorite it now! Whee!

Ah!

Fantabulous stuff :) Absolutely love this fic, good job!

Really great imagery too - everything fitted. LOVED this line too:

“Nothing happened, Seth,” Ryan says, the third time because it’s the charm, and Seth sinks back, his eyes feeling like they take up his whole face, all the light in the world flooding in at once and making him fiercely, desperately blind.

Great great great :)

o, this is so good! *runs off to read the sequel* really good imagery and poor ryan!

OMG! wonderful! you should have written more of the "flash-back" ;-)

I really liked that, a lot. One of my first OC fics. I'm glad there are slash fics here; I'm pleasantly suprised at their presence and quality. Excellent imagery. I like the different comparisons. Seth's tone is very good, and very IC

No! Not "THE END!" Don't you dare do this to me it's so bloody unfair and - uh-

*blushes deeply*

I just realised you wrote a sequel.. Yay! :D

Oh...I feel so sorry for them...it's so sad...and ow, if Seth had bit his tongue in half, ow! That would have hurt! I'm gonna stop thinking about that now. I really should read over what I say before I post a review because I sound a litlle...more insane than I am. But not much more, just a little. And sometimes I tend to ramble on about irrelevant things, like now. But anyway, I'll post this review now, because I love you, and your stories, and will you and your stories marry me so I can luffle you forever and ever and ever? Except not, because I don't know you. Also, I want a prequel to this story. If you wrote a prequel - wow! Yeah, you could be the next George Lucas! Only better - because I like Star Wars and everything, but he totally sucks at dialouge. But you don't. You like, unsuck. Or just...rule. Characterization...awesome. I'm...I use like, elipses too much...I'll shut up now!

Awesome. I am so glad you made a sequel! That would've been such a cliff hanger. But purple glitter? I'll just read the sequel to figure that out!

Absolutely loved it, very sad-ish ending though. Love how you wrote Seth, his mindset was right on, or at least how I think he would think. . . I think. *grins* Ryan's reaction was priceless, but so was Seth's. It was too funny when he was like 'did you get lucky?' and then follows it up with an abandoment question, totally male teenager. You kept them in character wonderfully. Your story was breath taking in it's originality and the plot's creative nature. Hope you continue to post your work, it's very well written. *grins* *glomps author* *waves*

Icy

Wow. Read a lot of ryan/seth slash but this blew me away. Love the idea, really realistic and believable, and just in awe of some of the images you used: "Ryan’s shoulders draw up like wings, curving in" it just explains him so beautifully. Please continue!

u gotta write a sequel...thats how much i love it