Reviews for Let Nothing Come Between |
---|
Rose-Aki chapter 1 . 2/28/2016 I really loved your idea of Neji being so protective of Tenten and Sasuke of Sakura. Amazing story :) |
Symphony's Feather chapter 1 . 4/4/2013 I love all of your NejiTen and SasuSaku fics! Your imagery is so good ("bathed in starlight"; "Sasuke's eyes were flat chips of onyx glittering with annoyance, his face fixed with a tight expression, chin tilted downwards as he glared at Neji") and the words flow like music. Reading your writing makes me feel light inside! |
HappyDeathFairy chapter 1 . 9/17/2011 Awesome story! |
StreetlightsAndCityscapes chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 I liked it. I think it shows the contrast between the two teams really well, how Sakura is protected, but Tenten fights on her own. And it shows how the two kunoichi react to both each other and their respective teams. It's good (As if you didn't already know that...) |
SpaceNugget11 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011 I have nothing to say other than that this story was beautifully written |
The Disappearing Me chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 The contrast was VERY interesting. Great job! :) |
erikagiggles chapter 1 . 1/22/2010 I love how Sakura managed to redeem herself in the end & resolved all of the tension! The subtle pairings were brilliant as well! |
empathapathique chapter 1 . 1/19/2010 God, this was TENSE! Great job building the tension between my two favorite men, over-of course-their girls :) |
crystalwolfberri chapter 1 . 12/2/2009 what great teamwork! wonderful writing, ti was amazing to read. :) I love these two teams, and their interactions are so funny yet serious and good. |
Sairalinde Inwe chapter 1 . 6/22/2008 Awesome...simply and beautifully written! I really like this one; it shows the team dynamics really well in both Team 7 and Team Gai. You kept everyone in character too; well done! I also liked the way you described the life of a kunoichi and how shinobi aren't mindless killing machines (the good ones anyway...) and that each kill can have a real effect on their psyche. You made them more human, I liked that. There was one thing I noticed at the end of the story: "...she linked her arm threw his and Lee’s." You used the wrong form of through. But it didn't affect the meaning of the story so it's ok. Again awesome story! Really nice work with this one! ~Saira |
AGENT KELL chapter 1 . 5/9/2008 IC loves the way everything was put together! In a way, Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi are Sakura's boys, as many have used this phrase. And, Neji, Lee and maybe Gai are Tenten's boys. [: very sweet, and I love the hints of SasuSaku and NejiTen! |
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 2/16/2008 nice |
Ribs On The Run chapter 1 . 11/14/2007 Really good fanfic! I like how everything happened - it seemed as if it was all flowing along naturally instead of being plot-orientated. And it's always nice to see team loyalty. . |
RofS chapter 1 . 9/8/2007 It appears that I neglected to review a lot of your stories that I read... I'm sorry? Anyways, this story, as well, is absolutely wonderful. You are an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading more of your works. |
A Little Someone chapter 1 . 3/31/2007 Oh, I liked it. I don't really read much Neji/Tenten but I loved how Neji was acting; it's sweet. Same with Sasuke. Anyways, good job as always. |