Reviews for The Unforgiven
Guest chapter 4 . 4/24/2017
It can be either one, cemetery or graveyard. This is really great, by the way, and normally I'd leave a longer review, but Shakespeare auditions have me brain-dead.
The Ambivert chapter 18 . 5/28/2014
There aren't many fics out there about the infamous Shepard boys, so I was absolutely thrilled to find this. It was PHENOMINAL! Your writing style is fantastic, the characterization was completely on point, and you did an amazing job getting reader reactions.
I gasped, cried, cringed, and laughed along with the characters (Seriously I would be in public reading on my phone, and I would gasp or shout out some exclamation really loudly, which naturally meant got a lot of weird looks). I could keep listing things I loved about this story, but you get the gist of it. Thank you so much!
Sincerely,
The Ambivert
Savagetilley chapter 2 . 5/18/2014
I love your work man! its amazing! it just flows and oozes coolness! keep up the good work!
Me chapter 9 . 3/23/2014
Now I get why Tim has problems controlling Curly.
Me chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
Love it, where Tim cares about Curly. I like the flashbacks, too.
nadine1231966 chapter 18 . 2/18/2014
GOD THIS IS AWESOME!
It really is keep up the tuff golden work!
nadine1231966 chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
Hahaha! God Two-Bit just cracks me up!

Another tuff golden chapter!
nadine1231966 chapter 2 . 2/15/2014
Awesome chapter I really did like it keep up the tuff golden work! :)
nadine1231966 chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
AWESOME! keep going!
PinkiiPromise chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
How high is the chance that you update the story really fast :D ? Its a really good story and I would love to read the ending :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Well, actually, two more things: Not only do I wish you fixed up some of the technical things (particularly punctuation), but I also wish that you'd take out the headers (is that what they're called?), where you wrote "Ponyboy's POV" or "Tim's POV". I think the story might have gone more smoothly if you did. This looks a little stupid because I reviewed this two days ago only to come back and pinpoint some things but it's coo' :)
Guest chapter 11 . 8/22/2012
When I re-read this story, I was a little disappointed. You got all of the characters down in such an unsentimental, yet heartbreaking way but the lack of commas or apostrophes in some places were incredibly distracting. Yet, the plot clicked along so smoothly and so beautifully I had to wonder if it mattered at all - every chapter, there was always this one part where I would read it and I'd fall in love. Like the end of this chapter. It's been five years and I know you probably are never updating this again but I just wanted to let you know you have a gem here.
Miss.Sisi123 chapter 7 . 11/26/2011
I loved the story it so good. I wish I could find a good sexy love story about Tim Shepard
bellydancer10 chapter 14 . 1/13/2011
dang ur rlly good at this cuz u had me crying by this chapter, my gosh! u rlly put the relationship between tim and curly into depth, that is rlly good.
LadyOfTheUnderground chapter 18 . 4/22/2010
I absolutely love your stories, and I really hope that you make another chapter. There aren't enough stories about Tim and Curly, and I think your stories do them justice. Even though they aren't mentioned in the book much, I feel that you have their personalities down. It's been two years, but I hope that maybe you'll pick this story back up? I'd like to see how it ends.
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