That was so terribly sad... But brilliant xxx

Very good. I like how Sirius thinks Bellatrix has him figured out, then throws her off by telling her he loves her - interesting. Your writing is good too, very easy to read. Well done.

this is wonderful 3

amazing. sirius begging bella to stay, her refusal, it just works. im actually getting a bit teary. siri and bella were meant to be...

Hello, very original, I thought they were going to have sex, well it is a sad and beatiful story. I liked it.

Wow this stories filled with alot of passion, lol, keep it up and write another one!

Wow...Fantastic! I throughly enjoy it.. you beast.. you have me hooked on incest now..

Welcome your second addition to my fave stories list.

Bravo, Bravo.

This is very good! You deserve to die, you know, because you have to write more (uahuahua i know i'm asking too much)

OOh, suspense! Keep writing, please!

angsty, angsty. but i really like your writing style, some of the imagery you use is simply amazing.

Oh man, that was strong! I felt so very badly for poor Sirius, and Bella too. I love Sirius/Bella fics and it is agonizing to think of their love being unfulfilled. It just rips my heart apart!

Great job!

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