| Reviews for A Lovely Delirium |
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   Sophisticated Sage chapter 6 . 4/9 Excellent work with this story! |
| BlueMoon538 chapter 6 . 6/5/2019 Great story. Maybe consider getting a beta to refine the writing. You have a great plot but it was just hard to read and I found myself scanning through the paragraphs just to get to the point. Also getting a second opinion helps with technical things like how to properly heal a wound. I would expect H to be knowledgeable in first aid unless you were aiming for her to be OOC? Surely on a mission like this they would have mini first aids with them and a bottle of dittany? H also seems utterly useless in this adventure fic. And then there seems to be a rush in their romance. It was just so sudden I had to backtrack a few paragraphs to see where that sudden intense feeling of love came from? He was so delirious he realized he’s in love? Hmm.. I guess that explains the title. But then she decides to give her virginity. H was perhaps also in delirium. That just blew my mind. Surely there are other ways to keep the man awake? And then it gets better, being the of course unintentional git that he is, and being delirious too of course, D slams it in without thought or consideration for the love of his life? Yes, very convincing Malfoy. I applaud your slytheriness. |
| Whit96 chapter 7 . 1/14/2019 Loved it! Excellent writing |
| ladylove001 chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 By any chance do u have another story like this one? |
| MarbleWolf chapter 1 . 2/23/2018 cute story |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2017 I am really hating this version of Hermione who doesn't have any more sense than a 5 yr old who doesn't know that sound travels and has absolutely no self control. |
| MonJoh chapter 6 . 9/1/2017 Good story. I love the words she spells out and repeats here. |
| MonJoh chapter 2 . 9/1/2017 Merlin and Morgana? The couple more angsty than these two? Brilliant cursing. |
| DayDreamer2796 chapter 6 . 8/29/2017 Amazing story! |
| Usb192837465 chapter 6 . 8/6/2017 Oh my god! This so good! Such an interesting plot snd such great characterizations of D&H. This is so sort yet sp full of do much emotion and drama. Bravo! I only wish it were longer. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/22/2017 yay! :) this makes me so happy! i'm a sucker for a happy ending...:) |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/1/2017 I loved this :) I think you do pretty well with the limited time frames during exchanges :) |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/22/2016 Hmmm, this is interesting... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2016 Awesome chapter! :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 Awesome chapter! :) I'm excited to read this story! |
