It is terribly bad ... Your fanfiction is fine, even great! But the gambit alleged sister came out of nowhere ... Just a mess. This error makes me want to cry. Is it possible to remake a version without it?

Will Remy ever get normal sight back? I hope so. Too bad about Warren. Will he still be able to fly? It's understandable that he won't be able to go on missions anymore, but that doesn't mean that he shouldn't be able to fly. He was so crushed when his wings were amputated just after the Massacre (I have those comic issues) that he was extremely suicidal at the thought of not being able to fly again. Please don't take that away from him.

this story is amazing.. Soo sad not to find great writers like you anymore

its my first time reading this story.. Its well written.. Very professional well written.. i am enjoying it

Line 1, last word; 'verbosity' would be more correct.

I'm liking this so far, I'm into the third chapter. The story is interesting and the characters seem reasonably true to canon (stated that way because it's been a long, long time since I've read an X-men comic and even if I were a regular reader, Marvel's done some wacked things with characters that would be called foul and OOC in fanfiction)and hey, it's got me reading fanfic past bedtime after everyone's gone to sleep, something I haven't done since before college, so seriously, good on you!

Really good story, until you threw the OC in... I stopped reading when you did. Sorry.

wot im gonna wait for your sequel to get an update, i started reading this a couple months ago, but i sort of drifted off when my e-mail got hit with a ton of spam T_T now i have to reset EVERYTHING! but this was really amazing, i loved what you did and i hope that you get around to updating soon!

oh poor remy's eyes never healed. good story. too bad about rogue though. she's a favorite of mine in the comics but i don't like her character in the cartoons or movies.

just saw the new x-movie and damn is the guy who plays gambit hot. hopeful that will spark some new fics.

ja ne

i am so starteing not to like your version of warren and i like the has been in alot of things like morlocks and morauders,but he's good what is this sheild thing he dad knows almost everything about the x-men but not this sheild his kenetic power make some kind of sheild in his you are an aswome writer,i love how you made 't wait to see remy and wolvie my fave i'dlike to hear from ya my email is if ya want to talk ta me about de x-men(lol i going all cajun on ya).well talk to ya later chere.

I LOVE THIS FIC!

*glomps the fic*

Logan/Remy are now my new favourite couple.

*rushes off to read sequel*

Aw, poor Remy.

Sorry I haven't reviewed any of your other chapters, I just didn't see a point leaving 17 reviews telling you how awesome your story is.

:D

Question: I can't find that yahoo group with the NC-17 version, do you have a link or have it somewhere else?

Well, I'm off to spend time I should be using to do homework to go read more of your fic.

XD

necro

Have ya ever put song's in ya storiere's?

like MSI - Stupid MF,Nickelback-This how ya remind me,

or Johny cash-hurt?

ya storys are very interresting but very deep, mind my term if im out of line

This sound like a fair story

im a Remy fan

you make it sound like he going to lose his hands

but ill keep reading

Okay, this story was AMAZING! I'm so glad I got to finish it before you posted chapter two in the sequal. You had me immediately on the very first chapter. I was hoping to read a Remy/Logan fic and I finally got to with everything I wanted in it and more. This fic was just extrordinarily excellent. There's so much I want to say, but I just can't find the rigt words. This is deffinately going on my favorites. And you are an amazing author. You come second to only one other fic author. And trust me, I'm picky with my authors. This story was just so amazing. I want to print it out into a little book so I can always read it whenever I want. And I've only wanted to do that with one other story. It's just completely AWESOME! And your betas did a good job until that last chapter. There were quite a number of typos. But other than that, it was perfect. I would have liked it for Remy to gain his sight, but I love how you ended it. Those two are so CUTE together! I'm really happy that you didn't have them actually kiss though. I think that that would look weird. The empathic kiss made me cheery. If you would have moved the storyline any faster, I don't think it would be as great. You had the characters take their time and that's one of the main things I loved about this story. And the whole story is so touching. You made me cry a couple of chapters because it was so cute. It's just so good. I'm sorry if I've said that too much but I can't help it! -

I haven't read whichever X-Men comic this story is based off of, but I still loved it to death. So I really don't understand Remy's "betrayal" and everything that happened. I'm trusting what you put in here and following you to it. Don't let someone like Moon Fox get you down. This story was amazing and I don't understand why that person read it in the first place. You take those flames and just use them as harsh critisism. I'm very thankful that that person didn't make you decide not to continue. I can't wait until chapter 2 of the sequel! Please take care of yourself.

Kikino

P.S. Sorry that this is so long. I hoped you enjoyed and that it inspired you.

"Unleash your imagination and free your soul!"

Lovely fic.