Okay, this plotline gigantic pterodactyl bunnies in a battle against gozilla marshmallow ponies- in other words, effing awesome :)

BUT!

Your spelling and grammar need a little bit of work.

ALSO!

Try to include more descriptive language i.e similies, metaphores and personification.

IF!

You make a sequel, can you make the Friday dinners happen? Emily was (and still is) my favourite character and I know you can't see it, but I'm on my knees.

Ta muchly,

some random reviewer who came across you story and liked it :D

Man, you must really like hospitals. Lol.

ah! another wonderful awesome story!

i love your writing! completely awesome! :)

im only on the first chapter, and its good, but wouldnt chris be in the insurance business? maybe it says someting about it later in the story, butim just saying haha. otherwise, its great. i like it alot

I just read all of this story and it was very good. Chris is such an ass. He deserved to die. ;)

and i noticed the chapter titles!

i thought the part where lorelai had a gun in chris face!

The road between_ A sequel would be cool. I know you wrote it a long time ago but if you want to I would be internaly greatful. I also like the stories your writing now What A Beautiful Disaster and Do You Remember?.I like all your stories! You are a great writer and Update soon. Love your work!

Car

man i really like this story and i don't know if you have done a sequel, but if u havent u should so do one!

LOved your story!

:D

Wow. I am speechless. That was...great. Wonderful, moving, scary, suspenceful (is that even a word?), so many things I can't put into words. It was one of my favorite stories. For sure.

omg, that was like the best fanfiction ever! i loved it! you are an amazing writer! i give you like tons of props! :)

This was a great fic. I love it.

A sequel.

SEQUEL PLEASE... I've said it

continue it!

Great job!