Hehehe goodie merlin, what a good morning!

Moooore xD Seriously, this was very, very good!

:)

Cute

Please write more! This was awesome:)

I will first start with saying that I like the plot. It's sweet, but there are some holes in it.

Feks: I doubt that snogging another person practicaly right after they got shot would on the list of things I must do, even if the dramatics of it all would put everything into a new perspective or some bullshit like that. ( I'm not saying you said that, just pointing it out...)

Anyway I'm sure someone has pointed out your gramar mistakes, though I realy can't say a flying shit about that as I'm lousy at it myself. My review probably looks like a gramar nightmare. In my defence it's 2 o'clock in the morning...

Well, good luck in the future

Hhehehehhahaahahahahaaahaha i love it!

Ahhh! I can't take it any more...too..weak..must correct... *struggles* You've made me do it. You've made me write poetry.

I'm also sorry to say that this has caused me to be unable to read the rest of your story as the second misused 'there' almost made my head explode. But I can tell you that I would never want Harry paired with the Bill that rang the doorbell as the only reason he cares to check on Harry is the threat of his mother. Nice guy (not). So here you go, you'll get partial credit if I ever publish it:

Here is a little poem for you,

To teach you exactly what you must do.

To go throughout your life,

As these are things with which it is rife,

Without a misstep, stumble, or turn,

These are the three forms which you must learn:

‘THEY'RE’ means ‘they are’ but contracted;

it is meant to be used when several people are impacted.

‘THERE’ is the simple word to describe,

A place that is not here but on the other side.

Last but not least is the possessing ‘THEIR’,

Which means that what those people have they will not share.

They may sound the same, that is the mistake,

It is the differences that you cannot forsake.

So save me the time

And listen to this rhyme,

So the next time that you are confused,

My poor brain won’t end up so badly abused.

I'm putting my copyright on this. I have the file dated on my computer, you are not allowed to use it without my permission (this is what a disclaimer means: if you don't say it is mine, I'll sue you. And I'll WIN). Thanks so much. (And EGADS girl, if you have ever read ANY of those books listed on your profile I'm freaking Superman because some of those are classics and I KNOW that they have the spelling correct. *shakes head* Go back. Actually read those books.)

ALittleBlackHeart

Loved the last part !

this is brilliant you have a very well written piece

Wow... I love it! It's really fantastic! Don't like what they did to Harry though! Hehehe... good luck with any future and current stories!

Lol XD

Giant pig! :)

Poor Hedwig [and Harry] :(

Stupid Vernon -.-

Aww, Harry jumped infront of the bullet.

Cute ending :D

~IP~

Thanks for sharing!

hehehehe

loved it!