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![]() ![]() I'm so sorry for your loss... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that this brings horrible memories for you and I don't blame you for dropping it. All I want to say is I hope it gets easier for you. |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm truly sorry to hear of your loss. -Song I completely agree with Song. I'm sorry, it always hurts to lose a loved one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry to hear about your loss, but i understand your desire to discontinue this. i would feel the same way. |
![]() ![]() Definitely like! There was something in one of your earlier chapters where you were talking about the rings each Titan had - instead of saying Raven, you said Robin twice. Just wanted to get that out there, if it helps at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...I know it's been three years and all (a long time, even by my update-once-a-year-if-I'm-lucky standards) but are you EVER going to finish? I mean, you stopped right when it started getting good! (As if the whole thing hasn't been incredible) By the way, I love everything about it. All the original characters are extremely well developed and well fleshed out. I can really see them being real people. And the plot it really well thought out. You really did a great job with the characters and all the little hints you laid out (intentional or not). Muy bueno! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I guessed that Jenny was the Morrigan though a couple of times I was wondering if it was Kaitlin. I would love to read more of this story if you're ever going to update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that explains that. Good plot twist. Can't say I'm suprised, though, Jenny was choice# 2, being Irish and all. Now that I think about it, it fits perfectly. Kaitlyn was too passionate for an assassin. Jenny? Organized to the hilt, exelent multi-tasker, well-connected but unobtrusive, and a master at hiding in plain sight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kaitlin Morgan ... Morgan Le Fay : called by Merlin; 'Morrigan' after the bird relative of the crow, and raven. Also, tied to the 'Angel of Death' as are the other birds by the legends that spawned the 'Crow' movies. ... wow. Apparently, 'obscure' and 'arcane' are words that aptly describe the majority of my trivial knowledge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Mare. Jenny too. Your characters are well-fleshed and the plot is engaging. I hope that Gar gets his rear in gear... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking good. Pls upcate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I'll finish this story, I promise." *Pointed look* Sigh. I suppose I can't get too irritated- even though I like the story, continuation IS your prerogative. Still... -John |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just going through your stories once more, and I figured I'd pay back the favor you did for me on Litany- when describing the class rings (chapter 3), you have two Robins and no Ravens. More when finished. -John |