Yes. This. This is wonderful!

great write. very interesting I haven't read anything like this one before. enjoyed it

Tony as a kid when mum and dad fight, perfection.

"Right," she nodded, slowly: "so there'd be no fun and no sex…you're really selling yourself Gibbs."

I sniggered, that was lovely.

"I'd rather be with the fifty year old I love than with the thirty year old that was my second choice."

Well said, Agent Todd, well said *nods*

This was gorgeous - is it completely tragic that I got a little teary reading it?

And on an utterly shallow note... Snogging Gibbs in the rain? Lucky cow...

great story

YAY ur so good at this.

Ah! This story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I was grinning ear to ear by the end! :)

Wow, this was amazing! I loved it, brilliantly written, really!

aww that was sweet i really liked it. who were the songs by? x kate

great story !

great story! The whole moody thing is very true to life - blokes are an enigma sometimes! Total fan of Kate and Gibbs stories - this one is a top one! well done! write more!

Nice Quote of sorts:"...the first day of the rest of their lives..."

I enjoy all your fics, I think you write really well. Congrats! But I have to say, I LOVED this one. It was...wow.

That was so wonderful! I began thinking I need a boyfriend... LOL... That was really sweet, I loved it, you are an excellent writer.

I really liked that story, so wonderfully written and overall nice. Now I just wish Twilight ended differently.

aw! that was great! if only it could really happen!

so, are there any sequels, other fics in the works, becase i've read all you other fics on the ncis fanfiction site and i think that they're brilliant! cant wait to read more!

kudos

Prin