Please! You have to update! You just gotta! PLEASE! XD

UPDATE PLEASE i know its been years but still

Excellent so far. Your characterization is really good.

Oh o.o EDO! DON'T HURT YOURSELF BABY! *Sobs hysterically and clicks to next chapter*

Good grief...I LOVE the way you wrote Havoc here...3

This story is just so wonderful I can't even tell you enough. Are you SURE this was your first FMA story? Because it's really so perfectly written. It flows amazingly, and every single character is beautifully written.

AH! *Screams* WHAT DID YOU DO? How could you-? YOU BRILLIANT AUTHOR! Oh my gosh...OH my gosh...that...I wasn't expecting that...not expecting that at all. The hostage situation with Scar, Roy...Hawkeye...egads...this is better than watching the actual anime...wow...absolutely...wow...I love you so much for writing this!

Oh! O.O SHOCKING! Edo, what did you doooooo? *Will not be leaving you a coherent review on this chapter because she wants to know what happens next*

I agree that Roy would totally do that. And he'd put on that exact cold facade while doing it. And he'd feel bad abou it, but wouldn't let anyone know that. I swear you're the best writer of Roy Mustang I've seen thus far in this fandom. You're brilliant!

And it's probably weird that I'm squeeing over a discontinued story, but still. It's so good!

*Happily dancing in place* Ohhhh I love this story so far! You're writing everyone so well! They all seem perfectly in character and everything!

This was your first FMA story? Whoa...O.o it's amazing so far. I literally got sort a jump'n'gasp reaction to that dream sequence. And the interaction between Roy and Hawkeye was wonderful as well _

I love this plot! So unique! Short review, I know, but it's like 12 and I'm exhausted, so just count my other review too! *yawn* can't wait for the next chapter! Zzzzzzzzz...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! Before, I abandoned this story back in chapter 4 or something, whenever mustang discharged Ed, cuz I was so mad at him! But now I'm reading it again, and I'm very glad I'm doing so, because this is just so awesome! Ed with broken resolve... Ingenious! Amazing!

Wow it felt like i was reading a book...not meant in a bad way...i loved it you have to keep writing it though i want to know what will happen to Ed? and when Winry comes is that going to stir up something? and whats with the strange lady(Olive) well i guess i'll have to wait but loved your story keep it up.!

good work!

by:Carley

Wow this story is really amazing I love the attention to detail on both character development and plot! You also convey the story in a really enjoyable and fluent style of writing, thanks for all your hard work on the story and I hope you get some time to finish this story in the future because you have a brilliant plot line on your hands which would be sad to waste! Also like you said you are one of the few people on fanfiction who writes about the relationship between Edward and Roy with out spoiling the story by making it a romance! Thank you! your naruto story 'Call Me Selfish' was also a brilliant read! I hope you can update sometime!

This is a really great story, I hope you update soon, but you seem to have not updated this in a long time. Oh well, maybbe one day you'll update it again I hope and I agree with you about all the RoyEd fanfics, there does seem to be more of the romance type to an unnecessary point.