videl hissing saying to her son gohan of course i care about you and goten i love you i was following you around because i wanted you to say that you love me too

So What Happend To The Briefs

J'aime

Such a special heart warming story that deserve to be worth reading. However, as the other commenters, I would agree that the story would turn out to be greater if you write the story a bit longer rather than just making the pace and plot too fast and end it all like that. Honestly, it's not a bad story but it would be better if it was written a bit longer. I like the idea you make them homeless and got to survive on their own and the title did sounds it all. Not like my comment is going to do any help here since the story has been completed for so long but well, thanks for sharing this story! D

awesome

sweet story

newest "edition"?

I really liked this story. Definitly going into my favourites list!

It was quick, but very good. I liked it.

i din like the story at firstbcuz...gohan n goten could search the world for the breifs... thet could go to the lookout...kame island(master roshi)...millions of places...he could sense energy to find nebody he wishes...im sure he could find dragonballs...even w/o the radar...but i look past that...n it was n overall good story...7/10

aw! that's so kawaii! keep it up!

awsome really heart warming

Not bad, but I think you rushed the end a bit and made it all go too fast. Keep writing

That's just to cute! But what happened now exactly to the Briefs? How could it be Gohan never felt Vegetas Ki? Oo And the end was a little bit short, too. But I like the story. *add to favorites*

i like. it does tend to move fast and Videl seems a little out of charector, but the story is short and sweet. by the way thanks for reviewing my fic. i appreciate.