Ok so I’m reading chapter 4, ok? And then I realized something... Blade/ Sword (I forgot which one of them it was) is the same race as this Gardell guy, right? And if Gardell is trying to replace someone... and Joe mentioned them both looking extremely young and around Joe’s age looking... SWORD/BLADE COULD TOTALLY BE THE PERSON GARDELL IS TRYING TO REPLACE!

There's a skeleton hoodie ad next to the review box which is amazingly fitting. That is all.

Even though this might never be read, THANKS FOR WRITING THIS! It taught be a lot about the Kirby games I haven't played and was an amazing fanfic. Might reread and find others. You got me interested in Kirby again, and I'll see if there's more fics that don't have Meta Knight as an enemy like this one.

I know I'm awfully late but I really hope u do a sequel

Where is my kokoro pieces
I can't believe I haven't read this masterpiece yet!

GOD DAMNIT I DONT WANT THOSE FEELS GO AWAY.
Oh wow...I love that feeling of emptiness you have after you finish a good story, and just sensing it fill up with all those bottled up "WHAT'S" and "OH MY GAWD!"'s and just those emotions you get from reading. This was a great read and I'm gonna go check out some of yer other works! Write On!

Omg! I loved this so much! And Menai (my guess is) might be the reborn version of Meta Knight or something like that since Kirby is Jecra's reborn, which I found as a EXTREMELY interesting thing! I cried so much at the end though!

When's the sequel!? Let me know! :D

You butchered my heart, crushed my soul, blew out my hope, burned all my sanity and now the person love has died.
Goodbye Meta knight may your legacy out live the stars.
*cries uncontrollably until death comes*

You broke my heart, butchered my soul, stabbed my heart, destroyed my sanity, killed my hope and now you have killed the one person I love the most. Murder of love. May you forever be amount the stars, Meta knight.
*sheds tear*

Wait! Does Kirby still have Galaxia? What are in those letters? I'm guessing Meta Knight reincarnated into Menai. What about that pendant Jarla still hasn't given Joe? what about that guy that Joe knows and Silica was pestering him about. Will Joe ever ask him if he was using him to replace his death son or something? So many questions but no answers!

I'm scared! I'm scared of what's going to happen next!

Things sure turned dark really quickly. I still couldn't believe how much bad luck Blade had there at the end! I would've been pissed.

I'm also worried about Kirby though, now he's alone with real nightmares out there.

I thought it was going to go down in this chapter. Oh well, the hype for the next has been set.

Also D:, poor Kirby. I do feel sorry for the little guy.

Something is about to go down next chapter. Even more-so that Kirby screamed. It's never a good sign when something traumatic happens to the nicest guy in the story.

Tension rising, hype increasing! Poor kirby escaping a mob?! So uncool.