Reviews for Early Bird Gets What? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Itachi is my favorite character! I love bottom Itachi! Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much! I hope you keep writing it. |
![]() ![]() I don't think you've gotten Itachi too far OOC- after all, puberty? Pretty much everyone is attractive, especially when you spend time with them and get to know them as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! |
![]() ![]() Oh my god.*jaw drops then chuckles* |
![]() ![]() ![]() A I do not like that Kisame always the tortolito falling madly in love with the beauty of Itachi. Well I can not imagine, with its 29/32 years old, Kisame is so easily seduced. It's something I can not believe, especially when Kisame was the one-of-two even closed his heart to the rest. So ... I think you already know. I have the impression that for years has abandoned you, but equally I can not go without comment. In my opinion the story is good. There is a very powerful story, beyond the infatuation, but it is very good. There were some arguments that I finally believe me, if I'm honest, but from there on out I liked that the world is not limited to Kisame Itachi. It was interesting that even had a lover and Itachi, being the child who is to succeed as you get involved more deeply in the life of Kisame. Well, there is much I could say, but I refuse to let a scroll for review, so until I leave here. I'll read your fic and other KisaIta's hope that at some future you decide to write something else. Anyway, see you later. Farewell, Hevith. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are an amazing writer. I liked the story you did a very good job. I can't wait to read some of your other works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness, I love your Kisa/Ita stories! Absolutely a joy to read! Thanks for sharing with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked it but hm i would like them to be more than a pairng XD so I would read the other one you have XD |
![]() ![]() LOL I love how you made our super cool stoic missing nin into a little boy with a crush with just one oneshot. You really have talent xD |
![]() ![]() Hahah, cute! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow I loved it. It's great :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good good good. Itachi is so not out of character. Well, he is, but if he DID like Kisame he'd act like this. Virtual hug! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! For once it actually shos how scarily young Itachi really is. I love ItaKisa, too. It's the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it _ Wonderful job! Thanks for posting! |