So this was a killer read. No really, you deserve every bit of recognition you've attained for this. The whole group's in-character, it's believably creepy, and I like how you made Noodle being the first to realize something was wrong-is it because kids have been known to sense these sort of things, or is it because of her character?

Great fic! I hope you enjoyed writing it!

I know this is kinda late, but I just found this story and I gotta say it is awesome. It's creative and I love the general creepiness of it. You described all the characters really well and gave a lot of detail so it's easy to imagine just what's going on. I hope u decide to update this again.

I just discovered this story today (sadly) and I've gotta say it's one of the coolest and freakiest things I've read on this site as of late. The description, the overall creepy feel, the complete in-character..ness. I love it. x] You've honestly left me in suspence; I'd love to see it continued!

This is quite awesome. I really hope you find your inspiration to continue, I'd love to read more.

Cool story yo. 2D had the only weapon though, doesn't he? His flick knife. I wonder if he will have to use it to protect himSelf and noodle?

Nawharhar, potato-man. Keep it up, this is epic.

WOW...awsome storie it makes me feel like im there lol ;)

awsome.

Very nice. It feels like I'm reading a real book.

Great Story! Yay! Please look at mine! When Silence Is Broken The Night Is Torn.

Man, I love stories that come back stronger than ever! This story puts me in an awesome state of mind. Just creepy and dark and swealtering. Its great. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

-GCOE

O.o... OMG! this is the best story i've read since, well, EVER! it's incredibly well written w/ amazing detail. what's even more amazing is that excessive detail usually bores the life out of me, but you somehow manage to keep me interested & give a vivid picture all the same. i also love that you truly got a feel for each character and how they are, but didn't stick to their stereotypical view. like murdoc for example. you captured his nasty but humourous personality, but also showed his soft side, like he was w/ noodle. also i'm glad i'm not the only who thinks that murdoc & noodle have a somewhat father-daughter relationship. all in all an amazing story... creative, greatly detailed w/out being the least bit boring, heartwarming, dramatic, strange, funny, and terrifying all in one. you are an amazing author. please DO NOT stop this story & update as soon as you can!

I've been waiting when you would put up the next chapter. Anyway great chapter. I kept getting chills down my spine when I read this. Maybe it was because of that weird clerk. Update ASAP!

... I may have spat tea all over my keyboard when I spotted the update notification for this story in my inbox.

Rest assured, it was more of an "OMGWTFYAY!" expulsion as opposed to any kind of ... spit of displeasure.

Major props for the awesome chapter - and the awesomely creepy shop clerk. For some reason I kept picturing the grease-monkey you get a two-second glimpse of in the 19/20 video. ;

Awesome story keep write'n