I really hope you continue this with Cosmo’s point of view. But if not, it’s a great story as is.

This was absolutely amazing! Very sweet and well written! I know it’s been a few years since you’ve written this, but I’m interested in Cosmo’s point of view.

This is cute... I was looking for a good lemon about these two!

I scan read... Again... I actually missed most of the words... Too anxious... *DEATH*
Frolick with the bunnies, eat chocolate, pick flowers, watch the stars, have good dream bout unicorns and fairies, talk nonsense, smile, wear bright clothes... And grab your innocence with both hands and pull it towards your heart. It shall return to white...
XXXXO,

Wow... S. E. X problemos... I only scan read this... I was too young to read this... I'm still young... Make chapter 3 but with no lemon please! I see your potential clearly... DO one on Anti wanda and anti cosmo... Please? Oh and not a lemon! lemons... No...

GAHHHHHHHHH I JUST REALIZED THIS IS AN EFFING LEMONNNNNNN MY POOR INOCENCE
by the way, this wasn't bad, we'll it was scccarrryyyy on the, well... Kinky bits

I like the title and the story make more sex stories

Yu write with such poise. You have a talent for writing

Oh. My. Gods on Olympus.
this is absolute PERFECTION.
so mushy-just like I like them..
THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH.
Coswa forever!

That was wonderful and beautifully written. OMG I loved it.

Sorry Accidentally forgot to read chapter 2. What I say it's the best love story fanfic fron the fairly odd parents. Although I did not get your note. The taste of this dish extraordinary. I am now taking requested stories.

It was a long and very good story. It was almost as good as my horror story "deadly days"And my only romance story "The Relationship (Gumball x Carrie). Listen to my older cousin's remixes and tracks because he's the dj named "90odleaf" please listen to his songs. Thank you in advanced my friend.

Plz plz plz I know this is an older story but it's soooooooooo cute I cried a little reading this story my head shall be removed if I don't read chapter 3 it will explode do to lack of CXW and fall right off leaving me with no head so if u at all care about your readers head plz put up a chapter 3 other wise I will need some duck tape to put my head back on from not the same person as before and meerkatcosmo113 ;) just saying .

What happened to chapter 3 :( I know this is old but I love the CXW fluff too much plz put up the chapter 3 .

You have talent, dear FanFiction writer. To read this story is of such delight. I comment on the first chapter only be because that is the name of this story. I love how you named the chapters and how detailed the story is. And to think, this fandom is only from a child TV show. If you have such ability to turn a childish TV show into a heartwarming, loving experience, you could do anything with your writing. You could write about anything you possibly wanted. I only wish I was taught earlier to write like this, with such grace and emotional bonding. Like many others, this has taught me so much. But what has it taught me?

It has taught me that love is priceless, just all too priceless. How you describe the loving bond of a husband and wife is extraordinary! Thus wasn't just about pleasure, it was about how to care, because when I see others write fanfictions with sex, all they talk about is pleasure, pleasure, pleasure. They also forget that it is the force of love that has brought them towards the stage of it. That wasn't forgotten in this situation. I love how you wrote this, and I can see why so many loved it as well.

May the stars shine down on you,
Sunbeam Dawn