Reviews for The Greasy Haired Git and the Bad Rhyming Fit
Guest chapter 4 . 5/20/2017
Oh my god
Guest chapter 3 . 1/17/2016
No rhyme, sorry.
But i hated Umbridge, too.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
Nice, rhyming, i could understand it. Correct spelling and grammar, afaik.
;-)
ChaserOfTheQuaffle chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahaha! Thank you for existing!
completelyensnarryed chapter 4 . 7/7/2011
These are brilliant! So many stanzas, and, wow, they ALL rhyme!
Annalivia chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
This is brilliantly funny, well done!
SuLily chapter 3 . 9/24/2009
Snapes' thoughts on the Professors had me grinning,

If he only knew the prize he'd be winning,

To teach more dunderheads to not be dumb,

And learn which curses to stay away from.

Alas, I see it has been a whole 4 years since,

You've wrote this story of the Half-Blood Prince.

Thank you for the laughter that has ensued,

For at least the 154 that have reviewed!
SuLily chapter 2 . 9/24/2009
“I wish JK would write a girlfriend for me,

Instead I get stuck with some loathsome OC.

My love-life is just such a perfect disaster –

Couldn’t Miss Granger grow up a bit faster?”

Awesome verse, I love the way you rhyme,the meter and such, and the humor in each line!
SuLily chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
This is such a hilarious and original idea! Bravisomo!

SuLily
Vintery chapter 4 . 12/5/2007
Thought you haven't updated sense July of '05,

I beg to you to keep this fan fic alive.

Your rhyming so beautiful it leaves mouthes agape,

Never before have I seen such great rhymes for our Snape.
Vintery chapter 3 . 12/5/2007
I can not express my own elation,

To favorites this goes, without hesitation!
Vintery chapter 2 . 12/5/2007
Hilarious again, as I thought it would be,

I hope it continues into chapter three.
Vintery chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
Well that rhyme was wonderful, a beautiful text!

I'll review again when I've finished the next.
scarvesnshoes chapter 4 . 8/23/2007
u write so well, it lifts up my day...

i can't now stop laughing, u really did great!

i hope u write again

so we get to read

what old sevie can say

about his lily!

sorry, not as good as you but i tried!

u need to write one on fred and george too!
UrsaBeattheQueen chapter 4 . 11/2/2006
Well, really my friend what you manage in verse

has left you on par with my registered nurse

Mum who knows all and who tells me discreetly

That Sev is dear Dumbledore's man so completely

He gave up his rep just to fight for the light

to brave evil Lords and all manner of fright

No woman will have him, his fans have all split

and people are writing some vicious fan lit

So here we sit calmly, my nurse mum and me

and wait for an update
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