Yes, you definitely "revised" this. I remember when you had the beginning bit have the apprentice forget to send out a letter of acceptance to Duo.

I just tookna delightful jaunt back through this story. I somehow missed the revisions you’d made - they were wonderful and added a lot of depth and richness to the story. I’m so glad this story is still here. Thank you for sharing it with us all!

AHHHH you made changes to the first chapter too! I'm so excited, you just made my day

...squints. I've read this (and it's sequel) many times over the years, and I can't help but feel that the prologue is different than how I remember it.

p.s. I love this story, it's one of my all time favorites

Oh boy! Muggle methods of threatening/escaping. Plus psychology. I wonder how this little stand off between Dup and Draco, and Lucius and the remaining Death Eater will go. Certainly the sudden death of their fellow without the use of a wand but something quite different will shock them.
Sirius is in on the action! Probably a good thing that the G-boys have an experienced wizard. Though that wizard is used to using his wand, he is more experienced in spell work, so he'll be helpful in that regard.

omg! Well, that was certainly unexpected!

Uh oh. At least Hermione is trying to figure out why the Gundam pilots were branded criminals instead of instantly reporting to others. Kind of like with Lupin being a werewolf. She hadn't told anyone since she figured it out. Could be she won't do anything about these findings either.
I'm starting to really suspect Dup having a relation to Voldemort. Halfblood father? Names unlisted? Teachers watching for Dark magic tendencies? That creepy bear? Voldemort's glee about ten chapters back? I'm dreading this.

Nice integrations of Heero, Trowa, Wofei, and Quatre into their houses! It's just so funny, especially when the boys (will undoubtedly) ignore house politics for the most part.

omfg this is just too perfect! So funny! I am soooo looking forward to what happens next!

"Maxwell will never know that."
I DIED
THIS STORY IS MY FAVORITE THING

Not what I normally read (only found it because it was in a friends favorites actually), but this was really really good!

I don't think I have laughed so hard in a while.

I can't believe I missed that Grindelwald reference the first time I read this. I must have been uberfocused on getting back to the bishies in peril. So was Odin Lowe maybe descended from Grindelwald?

Personally I think Duo very well might be Relena's long lost twin. It would explain a great many things about Frozen Teardrop.

Whenever I read this again I pick up new stuff from it. Like Albus's observation about Heero. When I first read this I assumed Heero reminded him of Tom, but on a reread I'm wondering if it was someone else entirely.