Great story.

So this seemed like a whole bunch of impulsive conclusion jumping and barely let the old man talk. Things most likely would have been fine and after a little convincing from naruto and a surveillance detail to make sure is alright she probably could have stayed and out of a cage

I remember reading this YEARS ago and I just re-read it... still makes me emotional. This a masterpiece of a tragic romance

Yeah this is more of a tragedy than a romance it's a good fic just labeled as the wrong genre I don't mean to sound like an ass hole but when a member of the main paring dies it's a tragedy now this is a very good fic as a tragedies go angst, drama, and retribution and it seems to be a strong point of yours. If you need help with labeling the genre right your beta is supposed to do that

Yeah Naruto dying ruined the story. Nor even everyone dying made it good again like for real he died for a stupid reason. Why give Sasuke chidori if you don't give Naruto Rasengan? Why write a love story just to kill off the main character, especially since the tag doesn't say tragedy?

Uhhh why did Sasuke need chidori? Naruto didn't have Rasengan... apparently yiu just like having Sasuke beat Naruto I guess.

Why is Naruto still fighting against her?

Hmm Tsunade is just a bag of bones that uses Genjutsu to appear young and attractive. She is also weak willed and an alcoholic with violent tendencies. Naruto/Ino is super cute! The story idea isn't bad either at first glance. I might have to check it out cx

Yayyy! Sakura dies for running off at the mouth. Naruto seems like he is finally willing ro accept Kyuubi. Also, regarding your author note in the end, you can have as much smut as you want. :3

Meh Narutos way too hung up on Sakura. He isn't going back to the village so he should just accept his vixen.. xD

To contain kuebi one must have equal lvs of chakra to the beast naruto summoning four tails worth plus nine plus one equals fourteen tails of chakra narutos mom could because she was pure uzumaki narutos only half uzu and half namazaki part kurbi because his mom had kurbi in side her while pregnant with naruto like 33%demon fox thats why his control sucks because both types of chakra and a thurd mixed type Waring all the bloody fuckin time and so much of it that if it didnt disperse then he would probably unconsciously distort reality like the original jurbi

Can u write abit about naruto and kyuubi in the after lige a reunion of lovers

You coldent have made a alternative ending or something

Nahh man bull shit was gonna add u as fave now no cuz you cant leave a loveless guy find someone even if that someone if a big ass demon

I really liked the story.