awww, this was Soo Soo good I wish you'd update it!

Fucking Awful!

Runs away... sensing ki tho?

hi just wondering are you planning to update anytime soon ... not rushing you or anything just wondering, oh and i love how you edited the story from the previous plot its amazing so far :)

oh me likey this story please update it D

I enjoyed reading the first three chapters. I hope to read more. please update soon!

lol this is getting interesting. I'll continue reading.

your story caught my attention. this is quite interesting. So far your story is well written and the grammar and spelling are on check. good job. I'll continue onto chapter 2.

Sorry

It Was Revealed that Pan lack of saiyan blood does not decrease the chance of her becoming a SS. She Simply. Lacked the drive.

But that reasoning is also Bullshit. Akirya stated He does not know how to draw Female Super Saiyans... Aka he is Sexist

You are wrong about pan being a SS due to blood.

It was Revea

So is she going to reveal her identity? Can't wait to read the next chapter xD

Happy day an update! So this story is definetly taking a whole different path than the last story, keeping the characters much more IC I believe... I liked the other one but this version has its own points too! I'm honestly holding my breath until the revealing moments but my blood is pumping for the first fight! Keep up the great work and thanks for updating! no complaints for this chapter other than I think this is going to shape into a whole new story from the last one :3 (trying not to post spoilers is hard .)

I really liked the other story, but that doesn't mean this one isn't my favorite. I liked how Pan intended on keeping this charade. I hope you update soon.

Pan doesn't care about her parents? She lets everyone think she's been dead for years? That's pretty selfish of her. Out of everyone, I think Pan acts the most Saiyan. Although, I do love her strong attitude and the way she's keeping Trunks on his toes.
What exactly is Pan's plan, I wonder.

This chapter was great!

You write Trunks and Pan's personalities very well. My favorite part was when Bulma was grounding Trunks as he tried explaining it was Pan's fault. :)