dear Chai-dono-sama,

you made a great job!

i love your story.

loritakitochan

Absolutely, utterly brilliant. So dark. I loved the contrast with the little bit about when they were younger. I dunno if "all" relationships... I mean, what about Aya and Tori? But that's just an opinion. Really love this thing.

Love the way you described their love!

(dreamy look) It's so tragically romantic. I love Shigure when he's like this.

There's no doubt. This is definately a Shigure POV XD (theres a few lines in the manga where Shigure is called a "Ripple on water" By Hatori in one of the chapters) I think this is a perfect story that gives out the real Shigure. But I won't ever forget the mask mode of him. Happy-go-lucky, the mask of Shigure. Do not forget, FB fans, there's more to the characters then their exterior counts for.

- Rei

That was amazing. I loved it because it showed the truth of Shigure instead of sugar-coating everything. This was about him and Akito right? That seems like the only possibility to me...I really loved it, Please, Keep Writing!

Wow...I like this. It's about Shigure and Akito, isn't it? I like it a lot. It shall go in my c2. congratulations! Heh. Please, write more like this...i love dark stories...though I'm not sure where this one falls in that catagory... _~

Wow...short, but so good. I like how you don't say who the character is, and leave it up to the reader to figure out. Very clever. This is going on my favorites list!

sounds alot like kyo. i think this is awesome. maybe you could make this into his own little dairy.

i LOVE how you got the strange and almost frightening side of Shigure. I mean, i always thought of him as the obsessive pervert O_O' but now he just seems more crepy. Nice touch!