read tricksters choice and most of the sequal but didn't read the other book you mentioned... there are more?

aw, that was sweet. especially in the rain.

aw that's so sweet! I loved it, really! that was the best proposal fic I'v ever read, great job!

SMILES :) :) :) :)

Aw, so cute! I love Numair and Daine, they're like the best couple ever. Good job!

I thought this was good. to be honest, i think it works better as a one-shot because it just works really well short and sweet. it might be nice to read their wedding but i dont really think it's neccessary for the story to work.

aw this is a good propsal lol its short and sweet jope u do write more

Spots is a horse. Not a dog, you night want to fix that. They have THREE horses, not two. Cloud, Mangle, AND Spots.

I like it. I LOVE D/N romances! Don't you? I think you should write more.

KDCorLiz-E

AW, yay! I love D/N. Numy is PRETTY.

Off topic, but hey: I just made a family on sims 2 which is D/N and they had TWINS OMG!

i like, i like. it's rather abrupt though... and why would she be worried about her b-day?

otherwise, good job!

i like it. and its not as weird as the ones where either after or before the proposal they have sex so... well i glad for that and i think you should continue it.

hey it's good! I want to see someone write about how they tell the others, hint hint... heheh, that'd be interesting.

Wow!

This is so sweet and true to the characters. I love it!

It was good.

Way too short - especially when you did such a good job.