It’s a shame you let this go. It was a good story.

The poor icarus. Will this be finished?

Good chapter can't wait for the next.

Bow Before Your God

LOL why oh why are people so cruel to jack o'neill

Well i finally read and i liked it, grins, itneresting universe you got there... i'm off to read the next chapters

that's harsh. great story, interesting concept

Well a pretty good chapter, showing the view of the Jaffa under Baal as cool. Nice to see the bad guys every now and then. The Lab on Earth had some surprises, the Firestorm I expected the Iron Curtain, not so much.

Amusing ending, can't wait to see what happens.

This is gonna hurt! Well done!

Excellant cliffhanger! I can't wait to see this debacle:)

Update soon!

Irony, isn't it...

great fanfic please keep going! please update!

Nice chapter, I can see SGA going that way in a couple of years and the guards at area 51 are belivable in the way they act to it. The IOA meeting was a bit of a play on sterotypes but no big thing, although I would have thought the Brits would bring in Canada and Australia instead of America.

Tobias is from Freelancer I think, it's been a while since I played that.

SWEET! Very well done!

Okay just answering a few (well two) reviews.

Lennox RH-Yup, Hermiod is pretty much the asgard equvilient of mckay, a brilliant scientists, but likes everyone to realise it at the same time. And no, but close, they've discovered the soon to be named New London System, a Colonel Richard Winston Tobias being the fabled explorer who found it. hope his name rings some bells :)

Airm4u- I admit its not appearing a major crossover yet, but its a bit subtle in how i'm trying to do it. Its a small multi-verse crossover, but mainly between Stargate and the Command and Conquer series, with small elements i'm 'stealing' from all over the place.

interesting story thus far... what's it a crossover with?