Cannot say that I love this story. But it's likable,yet too unpleasant and dark. Plus to see Harry as Harry,to read him as Harry makes more of a connection. But yes, his animagi forms are the best I read till now.

As much as creative and innovative the track is, especially of going back in time and demons. This story feels like it went off track real gist of not only original HP stories but also the limit to which fan fictions should be allowed freedom to divert. How the demons and all the useless fights, useless almost dying, useless fight or die situations are taking real story forward. Which if you didn't forget was Harry's fight with and training for that fight with him. At least no use in dedicating so many chapters on this track or add demons angle to it.

I really think you went overboard, the whole thing seem more like a some crazy trial to test the chosen one or something like that, waaaay to harsh for 15 years olds, no matter how exceptional

httpwww. terion
Cool little list of premade spells. Thought they might be fun to send your way
-LadyValkyra

Cool

wow... awe

2436 meters is only 7300ish feet. that's not actually that high. one of the highest points in the continental United States is called Monarch Pass, and it is something over 14,000 feet high. I've been there and it's real pretty. it did have snow in mid June though

I vote thunderbird (he likes tasers)
And basilisk (he is a parstletoung)
For Rahkesh’s animagus forms

sanguine harassment?

Do freed dragon... and coming back without eggs or blood or scales.. a life debt as well, no?

3 hours to four days.. glad Covid-19 is not that quick.

If no glass windows. I thpight the bags of glass to be at odds. ("shards of glass coated in poison ")

Trek to door was great. Loved feeling of the evergreens over the trsiledge being a misstep away.

Characters are great. Not sure if Harry will rush in, but expect he would react well to the right advance.

Namach is first real mastery teacher and you have it natural. Nice job

So it is what you would have learned... i couldnt agree more.

Did Harry figure time displacement? I wonder if new school has some kind of age line that will block Harry when he arrives for his "20th" year and is 21 due to time in room of requirement

Laws against "All Magical Beings" would include witches and wizards, as well.

Rereading this, and the disease makes me remembering covid-19. Damn quarantine.