WOW! I loved the last sentence, and you have the perfect amount of mystery and just emotions. Reading this, I feel like I am Lily.

I see how you tied the whole story back into the Harry Potter series!... so this could be actually a canon back story (instead of an AU!). Not what I was expecting!... I was expecting Lady Velisna (with maybe the help of James) to concur Voldemort.

I wonder what happened with the tattoo?... that it was just a bluff?...

This was an interesting plot/idea!

cute date idea!

i was SO happy Onyx is returned! yayayaya!
I thought our friend was a goner... so happy cobra is back safe :D

and then, oulala james and lily As Well? This is a packed chapter!

brilliant

ouuu what a fantastic chapter!

hahaha! "curiosity killed the cat, but it never did anything to the dog"! So clever! hahaha bravo!

what happen to Onyx?

I still read this story and have a hard time remembering it's not canon. You really tied up all the loose ends I had with the series. The two biggest being why Voldemort killed James so quickly and offered to spare Lily. And why Peter would betray his best friends in the world. So thank you for filling in the blanks that JK did not. Wonderful story.
(Sorry it's a guest Review, already reviewed before)

nice chapter
SET LILY AND BONES UP

I just want to say thank you so much for this beautiful story. I may be crying so much rn. I'm happy and sad and why have you twisted my emotions so much?

I'll give you a long review! this story is great I love how evil lily is and how she is so powerful and nobody knows! I also love how you gave her blood red hair and how her animegus is an awesome wolf instead of a Doe like all of the other fanfics I don't really feel like typing anymore so I'll just say that this is one of my favorite fanfics EVER!

I love when moody rolls away from the mistletoe like its a grenade!

Wow. That is all I can say. Wow. I stared your work less than 23 hours ago. And I am blown away. This has to be one of the best, if not the best fanfiction I have ever read. I am so glad I found this. I am at a loss for words. Wow. This was better than some books I have read. I just, wow. This is beautiful. I have so much love for this story but I can not get it down in words. Please now I love this story from the bottom of my heart. It's amazing and you're amazing. Thank you for the laughs,The love, and the tears. Just thank you.
Love
Probiegirl1717

I don't Normally review on old pieces that are already complete but the story was so amazing. Thanks so much for writing this it took up a lot of time that I enjoyed spending. Your writing style is fantastic and I enjoyed the way you portrayed each character. Thank you so much!