I really really loved this story! I think you caputred both characters personalities perfectly and i truly believe you are a gifted story teller:) I admit i really missed chapter 4 though:( i tried to visit that wbsite you left in the description but i guess im just super technologically challenged(/.\)

Hmm

I like the timing and the comedy

lol cute

So many emotions with this one...laughter at Kakashi's plot to swipe Iruka's keys, sympathy for Iruka being manipulated into staying with Kakashi, and celebration when Iruka finally accepts Kakashi's advances. From foreplay to completion, it was incredibly well written and playfully steamy. Of course, love the morning after scene as well, poor Iruka will never live that down!

luv it! :D :) 3

:D luv it!

luv it! 3

nice comparison between Iruka and sasuke. in that way, it does, makes sense. funny, though xD
ooh, if you edit, put that that iruka's wet clothes are see through and kakashi finds that an (embarrassing) turn on. ik, ik, i am a perv. but .. . ooh, kakashi and iruka? such a delicious couple!

LOL

Famous last words...

I really had fun reading this story, I've been sick all day and its been keeping me occupied.

Do I really need to tell you how amazing this story was? No, I don't think I do. :p Thanks for sharing it with us!

Oh my gosh that was a wonderful story. Kakashi stealing iruka's keys that part made me laugh up like crazy. _ i am obliged to be a updater on your wonderful and loving story

Nirvana... I have reached... Nirvana *o*

It's all because of you too. :heart:

I absolutely loved this story and though I agree there are other godly writers, you are definitely one too. :heart:

So,... Yeah. I have much love! Good job! I enjoyed it greatly! :heart:

Now then, I really have to go to sleep. Dx

Night, awesome, and ciao!

~I.L.