I like your story! Please, update soon.

hi this chapter was really good and interesting. i can't wait what happens next. bye until next time please update thank you.

I really like this fic.

Youre great! Awesome! Fantastique! ¡Genial! Mega.

You are good.

Zutara is beginning. Boo-Yah.

I want to know how the story continues in this moment. Poor Argen, this isnt possible. Cause you have the power.

Great plot, and wonderful way of writing.

Although I'm pretty sure it's Commander Zhao and not General Zhao.

Oh what the heck blah!

Oh, jeez. Zhao should be very scared - a ticked Fire bender, and an even more ticked Water bender.

Where is the rest of the story? When will you update? it gets 4 stars for a very good story but 3 for the writting but don't worrie that is what my inmagination is for right so you keep writing and I'll keep reading!

So cute! Freeze on!

ugh...such...longer...

Hey! I can stay up ti; 3:oo am writing Avatar fics or my own stories! AND THEY AREN'T CRUD! Then again, I get so into it, I forget that I'm tired and I have band camp and 9:oo am in the morning. That's what i did this summer! Anyways I like that chapter! 'Tis great! And I thought Zhao was an Admiral not a general? Anyways! Can't wait till chapter 6!

Hi! I don;t think that this chapter was crud, and I know the feeling of late noightwriting. Well, it's good just to have another chapter out of the way sometimes :) Personally, i liked th is chapter. In fact, I like this story. AvatarBack to the Future. lol jk. Anyway, please update soon! I can't wait to read more! .

hey update soon its really good wonder when some zk moments are going to happen. again update soon!

good story. i think that its cool about that American Dragon, Jake Long thing. That's totaly awesome. but if you listen to ADJL 's voice, and thing of Zuko, and the same thing w/Rose, they sound nothing like they do in ATLA. its strange. but good story and chapter! update soon!

THIS IS GREAT STUFF! Can't wait for more!

Konnichi Wa! Although yu said this chapter sucked, I rather liked it, sry for the short review! pls updated soon! Ja Ne!

that was awesome! but wouldn't they have seen the smoke from the campfires? just wondering. but anyways, update soon!

-Miya