This is good. I like Kyo as main character and from his vision. But if only he not OOC and I love his long hair better.

so good! i like this one3333

It's been 7 years.. I don't think we're gonna get an update...

after he calms her down, they should go swiming, and that have a whole bunch of man hit on her and have kyo get beyound jealous.

And while the she tries to walk away from the men they follow her, until kyo comes around and kisses her in front of the men and she kisses back.

i love it i also live in la N.O

i just love this fanfic, i've beenreading it every day. please write more or continue on it.

...if you don't know who I am, you are seriously screwed.

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Ahem...I. FRICKIN. LOVE. THIS STORY! I love the whole modern band thing and you did a great job with keeping everyone in character! Please, please please please please PLEASE start working on this again! I know you can do it!

i so luv it please please update soon i hope kyo and yuya stay together

...its sappy and all...but its HELL GOOD!...its kawaii!...please update soon...(whenever convienient to u...but still!)...as soon as u can!

Wow! I really like this story. I hope that there will be more chapters. I really like how you have Kyo and Yuya together and the strong family bond with everyone. It rocks.

aw that was so sweet. UPDATE SOON!

good...good...GOOD! You so have to update faster! I'll be waiting! .

Write more! I love this story! I was thinking of something similar a while back. u don't mind if i post it do u?

Well, I don't know whether to go "aw" or "hmm". That was certainly an unexpected touch of sweetness. I don't particularly mind the OOCness displayed but it certainly stunned me enough that I'm left a tad puzzled. I guess that's what happens after reading a lot of gory fics and then suddenly coming across a touching one.

There were a few mistakes here and there, the common mix ups between "their" and "they're", "your" and "you're". Do be careful with the grammar; the little things tend to matter most of the time.

It was an amusing chapter, that's for sure. The way you write down Kyo's thoughts are definitely entertaining. Keep writing and best of luck to you with future chapters.

I love this story! It's so cute how Kyo is with Yuya. I can't wait to read more of this. Please update soon!