Reviews for The Mystical Ocarina
NoMeImporta32 chapter 15 . 7/29/2018
I know that this was supposed to be an Aladdin spin-off, but I enjoyed it more when you put your own spins on it. I wished you drifted further away from the Aladdin story, because your changes were the best. I love the personalities of the goddesses and their restrictions (clever use of Genie's rules) as well as the addition of King as a full character. The use of Navi, Tael, and Tatl were brilliant and helped with explaining certain plot points. I especially loved the chapters of Zelda living with Link in the forest and the game references. Following the Aladdin story arch as closely as you did became more distracting as the story progressed. Though from what I have read so far in this fic, it makes me much more excited to read your original stuff. You have a gift.
Crappyfanfiction chapter 20 . 10/12/2017
BWAHAHAHA! Did- did you just take the script for Aladdin and change the names and final battle? HahahahA! Good though...
Crappyfanfiction chapter 1 . 10/12/2017
O-okay... This just took a turn into Aladdin...
Crappyfanfiction chapter 4 . 10/12/2017
This is incredible. S far there is literally only one mistake, and to make myself feel better about this perfection I feel the need to point it out. Everything is NOT free, as in OoC you have to buy the shield, and they sell other stuff.
Topaz chapter 6 . 10/23/2016
OMG THIS STORY JS AMAZING JUST LIKE THE OTHERS YOU WROTE AND THEY ARE COMPLETED YEAH! Plus the next update is a day before my birthday how ironic
Chesta1892 chapter 2 . 11/9/2015
...Wow, ok there's trying to mimic the storyline of aladdin, and then there's straight up plagerisim. I hope the other chapters are a bit more original with what they say. Not saying it's bad but to many people try to do remakes these days. It gets disappointing.
Erika chapter 2 . 6/7/2014
This story is great, though I would have loved seeing Link singing "One Jump ahead"...
Another gripe: grrrrrreeeeeeeat... even out of the SSB fandom, Marth gets hit with the OOC bus hard.
Seriously, Fire Emblem characters always have to get the bad side of the stick outside of their fandoms, don't they?
At least he doesn't get it as bad as franchise-mate Roy...
Anyway, awesome story!
Andrew chapter 20 . 3/14/2014
Very good story.
When-Link-is-bored chapter 20 . 4/15/2012
I hate this story! Nah just jokin around. This is a fantastic story of Zelda: Aladdin style. The ending made me feel so touched that I could image the part where Zelda, I think, said hyrule was a wondrous place and as they look out from the balcony, with the blue sky smiling down upon them. What really made me sad though, was when Zelda said hyrule being wondrous, it made me think of the game of how link fought hard to make hyrule prosperus, and when twilight princess came out and the "Hero's shade", it made me sad
MckayDragon chapter 20 . 1/22/2012
Excellent for more long lasting LinkXZelda.:)
Neko-chan chapter 11 . 6/28/2011
I like Din!

She's so... so... so Din.

Yep.

She's Din.

(Sorry if my english is bad, i'm French)

:)
niwa-chan chapter 20 . 11/30/2010
I loved it! Is there by any chance going to be a "Return of Ganondorf"?
Ritsu Kaiori chapter 20 . 11/29/2010
OMG! I loved it! I love Aladdin and Zelda, so putting them together was awesome! Great job!
Beforethedawnbreaks chapter 20 . 6/28/2010
Cool story! I loved the Aladdin element as well!
some random person chapter 20 . 2/21/2010
dang...now i wanna watch alladin.

that was really good, i loved how u made din like him )
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