Ohhhh wow that was sincerely amazing. I don't know how long it's been since I've read a fic that was crafted quite so brilliantly that I had to keep stopping and rereading lines to absorb how great they sounded but that is what I had to do here. I kept going back and rereading parts of it so I could experience lines again. Your characterization was great too! All around a really successful piece. I'm not sure if you're still around or reading reviews but I had to let you know how much I genuinely enjoyed the privilege of reading this.

Interesting, very interesting. Good job.

dont know why i havent read this before now but glad i found it. loved the inner workings of dinozzo. well written and full of good imagery and feeling thank you;)

Wow. Just found this, really altered state awesome. Nicely done.

The descriptions in this are absolutely stunning. Nicely done.

Cheers,

Jimelda

This was lovely. Thanks.

/Belker

wow, this one is hard to put into words. It is strange, angsty, moody, totally cool, love tony angst, but is there going to be a sequel. I would love to see Gibbs side of this POV.

excellent story

thanks!

Strangely beautiful, but unsettling

Wow - it's wonderful to read something so poignant about Tony. Too often he gets put down as shallow, and I love how you've got into his head and given him depth here. And it's the post-Chained fic I've been waiting for. Wonderful.

Very well written. It is nice to read something for once that is not post Twilight. I look forward to reading more of your fics. :)

good chapter!

tnx

Wow, this is really good. Poor Tony! :(

Beautiful. Nothing else to describe it.

Ah, haunting story, in every sense of the word: lucky for Tony that "Jeffrey"-whether in his head or in the ether- was willing to be satisfied with just a flesh wound...

All these installments of Tony's life seem to be adding up, you know...he escaped this round-but what will he have to face next time? Wonderful "chapter" in this life you're building of Tony...what's going to become of him, in the end?

I love these little vignettes. Keep it up.