So I started reading and it was nice. By the time I got to chapter 10 I was like kinda in suspense because of what had happened. I liked it. Please update when you can because I wanna know what happened to Roy. Arigatou. .

I laughed my head off when I read Alexander LOUISE Armstrong in stead of LOUIS. I'm sorry. Little things set me off. You never know what typos you find around here.

Something just bugged me for a sec... Chibi-chan does NOT mean 'little shrimp' or 'little bean' it means 'litte', thats all. If you wanted to call him 'little shrimp' you would say chibi-ebi-chan (or -san)(i dont know what bean is in jap...). and thats what was bugging me. Ja ne!

love the story. please update as soon as u can.

ash89

This is a very interesting story, of Ed & Roy fighting this type of different enemy.

And to also mention, fighting within themselves.._

Please continue to update, cause I want to know what's going to happen next!

~M~ v~v

This is turing out to be such a fantastic story! I really am looking forward to getting to read the next part.

good chapter but I didn't see Al in this one but it's ok.

Good story so far please continue!

Roy really derserved that. i can't wait till the next chappie :D

I really cant wait to read more! Its getting so good!

Poor Roy! Sex is bad for you... Thanks for showing us this Roy.

Same on Roy.. XD

Another great chapter. I cant wait to see what happens next.

dont sell yourself short its nice proloug too

HURRY AND WRITE MORE,I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

LOVED the chapter is was interesting I was going to review when I first heard chapter 5 was up but my friend was hoggin the computer. Loved the chapter hope you continue soon _~

hun, you have a good thing going. the only way it could be better would be if you got it beta'ed. some of the spelling mistakes and grammar make the story somewhat confusing.