YAY Happy endings are my favourite!

Omg your story was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ! Seriously it was fascinating... and beautiful and sad. Well, it's very rare that I like lana on fanfic but I did in yours. I like your lana lol. Of course I LOVED lois and clark interaction during this fic.
So just one question, seriously who was the lady with the scar ? First I think to Lana or Chloé but when I read "scar" everything became all confusing. So WHO WAS SHE ?

omg this is so awesome!...

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?

*brain explodes*

HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP.

That could have continued for awhile, but I checked myself.

Three chapters in and this is one of the best middle-length SV fanfics I've ever read (much like its prequel). Not only is it Clois, but you know what the best part of it is? Lana Lang.

See, here's the deal: I really like Lana. In fact, there are even some moments where I love her. My hatred for Clana (seriously, at any point after Hypnotic, and several points before that, the ship was just damn toxic) sometimes spills over and taints the girl, but when she's standing on her own two feet or paired up with literally anyone but Clark, Lana is a fantastic character. I wish people would use her in this capacity more often- as the strong, artsy girl with a destiny of her own that, while entwined with Clark's, is separate from his and NOT as his love interest, but instead a dear friend and powerful ally. And if either Season 4 or Season 5 had gone differently, that might just have been how they ended up.

...stupid DC headquarters and their stupid restrictions on Clois... Clana wouldn't have been dragged out so long and so painfully if they hadn't been determined to keep a lid on Clois until they were both at the DP...

Instead, I choose to accept this as canon, m'kay?

Really enjoyed this, and its prequel

I just have to say you did a wonderful job with this and the prequel story. You have amazing writing talent. At first I thought it wasn't going to work out with all the time traveling stories happening at one time but you made it work. I applaud you & thank you for the entertainment piece.

I just finished reading it, and I'll probably leave a longer/better review later since it's 4:44am, but I just wanted to let you know that I cried. The twists were incredible, and this story (and the previous one) was beautiful. I'm still wrapping my head around it. But I am writing this with tears in my eyes. Thank you for writing this.

Awesome story... I really enjoyed reading it!

maad nice storry

Wow I just read this all through.

It was GREAT, you wrote everything so well. And captured the characters perfectly.

This has been one of the best fics i've read!

Great story, although, it was a little sadder than I was expecting. Still, it's a great read. Thanks for writing!

FABULOUS! So very glad with how this ended. I liked the "woman in a scarf with glasses eating her face." Lana from the future very nice touch. Bravo and shall read more! :-*

OMG I'm SO happy. I was seriously gonna be insanely pissed if Lois stayed dead. :)

Oh. Crap.