I don't understand the situation between Hermione and Severus. What the hell is wrong with Severus? He acts as though H should be the one bowing down and apologizing to him. And there were a few chapters that were basically fillers. How sad that this story was abandoned though. Despite the few inconveniences, i did sort of like the plot.

Why do the good stories always have to stop abruptely and get abandoned?

I like this chapter very, very much, how he goes from fury to regret.

I've enjoyed what you have written so far.

I hope you soon find your muse again.

Oh how I wNt the story to come back.

This is the first time I have ever wanted to backhand Sev. This story is so entertaining. I haven't lost interest in it yet.

Seriously dude, you need to finish this, it's good!
...And some smut would be nice! :)

I HATE THAT HE DOESNT KNOW ABOUT WHO CROOKS IS AHHHH YOU HAVE ME HOOKED

Hey really great story i wish u could finish it. Spicy it up between the main character. :)

I'm really liking this story so far! I only found 1 grammar mistake that kinda threw me off: When Snape told Hermione her kiss was "addict able". Did you mean addictive? Aside from that, I think the plot is really original, and I can't wait to keep reading!

I can't believe this hasn't been updated. Please finish!

Very enjoyable

Na,just kidding.

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Please update soon.

Please come back, it's a great story. I need to read more, I want Hermione to get justice! Come back!'