aw

so cute

they are so meant for each other

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well done!

ja ne ! (see ya!)

beautiful - really really liked this one a lot - i could almost feel myself catching my breath at the same time as Hitsugaya...

dis hot, and sweet _

Very well-writing one-shot, full of emotions... I like it!:)

This is SUCH a beautiful story, I LOVE it! After wading through fic after fic after fic trying to find something worth reading in the HitsuHina genre this was a true jewel to find.

This is probably the best story that I have found thus far for any bleach writing, thank you so much for setting down and taking the time to write this out.

I have to admit my favorite part was 'His eyes are gentle, liquid, and they stare into hers...'

and 'Tender and throurough'

FANTASTIC word usage, and such a fantastic story. Amazing! Thank you so much.

Wow, amazing!

I just love your writing style. I loved the lines, "but looking up to him like he’s a man. And he scarcely breathes." This just made my day _.

Another spelling nitpick or two: Rukongai. And it /is/ Shirou-chan, but eh, it doesn't detract.

Lovely! It's a pleasure to see good writing among the, er, chaff out there. You've kept Momo in character admirably, too.

Oh wow. I'm so glad I found this. This is just beautifully written. Completely in-character and believable and just...warm. That's how I feel, having read this. Thanks. It brightened up a very bad day.

You just made my morning. I have such

sweet. like this fic

About Siro-chan. I read the translations too and was wondering about it. But I think Shiro-chan would be more correct as shiro means white. Also in both katakana and hiragana there is no character for the si sound, only shi. One last thing, I don't know whether it's Sesshoumaru or Sesshomaru but the extra u indicates an oh sound. (hold the o sound for a second longer) And the extra u is really important. For example, shujin is husband but shuujin is prisoner. (Lol, I love that example)

Sheer gold. This is fabulous reading. You made everything swift, tender, rather tremulous because Hitsugaya is still a boy, though he may be stepping on the edge of manhood. I love how you described Hinamori's realization and the change of the meaning behind "Shiro-chan" and the fact that she finally _understands_. Excellent, excellent work with fine writing. Perhaps some technicalities (I think it's "Shiro(u)-chan" but I'm not about to complain when you compare such tiny details to such a gorgeous, intense fic. :) Thank you for a marvelous story.

wow. seriously. wow.

this is gold. i loved it. i haven't read any of the manga, but even from the anime, hitsugaya hinamori just jumps out at me. i love it.

this was flawlessly paced, with the right breathlessness of the moment, of her thoughts rushing in. i LOVED the description of the new, mature hitsugaya...oh man, just so good.

have you written any more hitsuhina? coz damn, i wanna read it!

Oh wow! This is so good! It's beautifully written and the inner turmoil is really well done.

Beautifully written..! I love how you're fastforwarding things and thinking of the day when Hitsugaya will tower over Hinamori... haha.. let's all hope the realization would dawn on Hinamori just like your fic.. xD

especially loving the last line "no ice inside of him could ever freeze over these flames"!