I'm in love with your story. This is my second time in this month reading it. You should update Harry Potter and the Prophesized Six! I wanna' see how everything ends

thank you for this amazing piece of writing! please make more! you are now on my favourite fanfic author list.

Love love love!
Brillant love!

Superb end to their second year. I imagine that Harry's training will take up several summers because there's no way that a third year can learn enough to defeat Tom in just a short period of time, but I'll have to wait and see how things go I guess. Thanks loads for writing this. Can't wait to see the plot for their third year.

Good end to their first year. Onto year two.

Personally I think this story is a little “then this happened” if you know what I mean. I think you need to put more emotion into description. Like instead of saying “they got to the train station and then this happened” describe them going to the train station and then build up to what happened. I also don’t really like how much raw power Harry has. It’s not very believable and very annoying. I understand this is a fox but even in the original stories, Harry is only an average student. Also grounded for two weeks! You confront a bloody basalisk and get grounded for two weeks! Seriously I think that Harry should have gotten a good spanking for that. Also I hate Harry and Ginny’s bond thing. It’s just annoying. And the way they converse is just not natural, and this is coming from someone who’s shit at dialogue. Also please use British phraseology. Please. I also feel like this is too close to the books. Again the description bit. Like change it up. This is basically the books except with Lily and James and more prophecies. That’s what I think.

Its Kings Cross Station and people have to remember that the author of this FF uses American phraseology. J. K. Rowling is a British author so all Fan Fictions should be written/phrased in UK English not US English.

I think that he should make up a new family house, the Augustus family house and I think he should be the lord of that house. I think you should have him go to Gringots and make up a family crest, then have the goblins put the crest on the rings and pendents, with this motto below.
Vitadelia Sembiosis Iternitus Fortuna Maxima.

Girl.

The interesting part in this chapter was about the nasty Dursley. If Lilly only knew that if she and James had not survived Sirius would be in prison and Harry would spend 10 years living as a house elf to her sister and her family. It is good they survived seeing that Dumbledore would ignore there will.

Professor Ashton ?! Who is that tosser ? In canon it was Professor Kettleburn...

While I’m not against a Malfoy, maybe even Draco redeeming himself, I can’t believe what happened in that chapter. There’s no kid on earth who, after growing up for 11 years with one of the most bigoted, racist blood supremacist, will be like “no I don’t like my dad’s views, I don’t want to be like him”, it’s NOT POSSIBLE. He can change his views during his life, maybe after spending x amounts of years in Gryffindor, he’ll realise that he’s been wrong all his life about
Muggleborns.

But Ti arriving at Hogwarts and being all Gryffindor and all is plain dumb. It would’ve been way better if he was quite like Malfoy, maybe a little less self assured as he’s the youngest, and changed over time. It would’ve made for a MUCH better plot line.

You vastly underestimate the influence that your parents have on you while you’re growing. I’ve met kids that hated black people without having ever met a black person, simply because their dad or their parents were super racist.

You had a much better plot line on hand...

You already know what I feel about Harry being once again punished... still as stupid

Yay no one was born by the Basilisk !

That’s a fundamental problem of stories where Harry’s parents are alive. James could’ve found in 30min max which creature petrified the students. He just has to open a motherfucking book about dangerous animals and he’ll read about the cockatrice and the Basilisk.

And the “don’t go look for it” is just setting up Harry to be grounded next summer

Ok proved me wrong but now you’re back gonna have to explain why she started writing in the diary