PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE

Huh. Good story, but it feels unfinished.

What's the difference outside of being more convenient than thumbscrews and knives? They're literally the same thing... torture. You can't really say one's the abomination while the other is just necessary. This was probably a break in Kedars character more than anything. He wouldn't make that distinction.

No this can’t be the last chapter it’s too good

I read the story in a day and you left me on a cliffhanger. If you ever come and finish this story I'll ever be grateful. I hope you keep on writing.

an excellent story. hope you made a sequel.

This story's really well written, I can't wait for more
And thank u for sharing it.

So.. I stumbled over the story after looking through somebody’s favourites on I really liked it so I’m kinda wondering how it’s gonna end since I now reached the end and that was from 2009 ... Are you ever going to continue this? I really liked it good research on the language and cult the writing was really really good!

ok y'all have y'all watched this particular part in french? when Rick throws Izzy the money and laughs it cracks me up! I love the story by the way

I feel like I red an auther version of this, but I can't seem to remember if it was yours... I would be looking out for copyright if I were you! You never know if someone has stolen a plot from you.

Now this was interesting. I nice blend of the two titles. Looking forward to where you will be taking this.

i thought this wasnt slash, seems its going that way to me. i mean when you take a dude to a dance its kinda the way the wind blows right?

the problem with having harry be an 11 year old useless child is that the plot really doesnt seem to change at all ... because hes a useless skill'less child with no magic or anything lol..

seems almost boring having harry potter be 11 year old through the plot of the mummy

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!