"Hi who are you?" I extend my hand in friendship towards the sullen red-headed boy. Sand grasps my fingers and consumes my arm! It encases my. Key and the last thing I see or hear is the boy turning and glaring with those jade green eye. "Gaara, the sand assassin." He says before the sand covers me completely and I know no more.

wow I loved it! :3

very cute update soon i love the history

...wow. That was amazing. I adore this.

Its different and different good. Good job

Well, It's definitely a one-shot for Sakura xD

Whoa, really good story! I liked it.

wait does it means to let her fear show?

This is a really good oneshot, it's very interesting

Nice. Your Gaara is perfectly creepy. Thank you!

this was the best one-shot Ive ever read :D Great job

OH this was soo good. I think its really good. This is probably one of the bet Gaara Sakura fics I've ever read. I love that it was not fluff. It was dark and twisted and wonderful. Good work.

WOW i love this totally Gaara but im somewhat confused what does he mean "open your eyes" and does he kill her or does he let her live tho it is a one-shot you should make a sequel or a second chapter to go with this one but i love it a lot _

I don't really understand completely but it is incredibly well written!D

Simply put, I love this! It is dark, raw and so truly Gaara; a pleasure to read.