thank goodness it was just a nightmare :p beautifully written ;)

This story was sick! Good sick. I like twisted Naru/Saku, especially when it's done correctly. Great work! :)

Honestly, the description and intriguing plotline here was absolutely flawless.

Even as a oneshot, this could've actually had potential to fit within the manga/anime. Thank god the Naruto tv show isn't as dark as some people make it out to be. At the point where Naruto saw Sakura's lifeless body, I wanted to cry. Perfect, perfect description of what could've been if she had been defeated and successfully transformed into a puppet.

The way the events and situation was written was so realistic that I found myself reading this again and again. You had me right in the end until I realized it was only a dream. If you hadn't said something reassuring like that, I would be at loss at the moment.

Also, very creative vocabulary and no grammar or mechanical errors whatsoever.

I think you've done a splendid job at this - great effort! :)

even though its dark its still really good.

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Fantastic. Glad you made it into a nightmare at the end, I was starting to become sad.

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oh my chilling... very chilling... i love it! i love disturbing fics like this great job! poor naruto though he lost sakura chan...

SPOILER?

Aaaaah (Relief) it ended happily :'3

and i'm glad that Gaara survived in the real series :#D Gaara/sakura/sasori and naruto are my favs :3

2 bad that sasori died but i'm glad that Sakura and Gaara survived atleast :D

I love the narusaku ending in the fic3333

(Sorry 4 bad English)

Oh how sad. Gaara died. but awesome!

It's really good. Lol, the part where Sasori says something like," I don't work that way".

Yeah, I wanted to rip Sakura's throat out when she was a kid in Naruto, but Shippuden really changed my mind!

Awesomely written D

That was well written.

Yow! Excellent job. I totally didn't see the nightmare-spin coming. A chilling little what-if, as good as any other I've read.

Sasori was always, to me, one of the most frightening of Akatsuki.

Aww, how can you say Saso-chan's an evil freak? I mean, after his parents died at the hands of Konoha and his grandma didn't really try to do anything to help him and let his mind wander, it's not exactly his fault that he puppetized himself, is it? D: That's what makes him so cute. x3 And he also let Sakura and Chiyo "kill" him. D: Nice fic though! Very dark. I liked it!

Stop checking Sasori. Okay I admit, he is freakish,but that's what makes most Naruto characters strong. Nice story, Sakura had that coming. No just kidding. Sasori does die, but it wasn't Sakura's doing that caused the final blow. That's as much as I will say. Anyway, keep posting good stories!