Reviews for Learning to Breathe
groverthegoat chapter 14 . 14h
dude were you in Vietnam or something goddamn
BCLinguist chapter 2 . 7/13
I don't know why authors include minute details about characters' diets and exercise routines. It doesn't reveal character or advance the plot, it's just nerdy wish fulfillment.
LopsidedGrinner chapter 19 . 5/24
oph made me frecking cry this did
abhinavvemuri123 chapter 5 . 5/7
6 feet tall right
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unhappycamper chapter 1 . 4/28
The fact that this story isn't finished makes me want to gouge my eyes out.
TooLate chapter 21 . 4/28
This story is ancient, but I am so frustrated that I had to at least write something. I am so disappointed with the way you closed off Harry and Ginny's relationship. They are the two most important characters in the story, and all they get is like 4 lines of dialogue about how Ginny never would've called him a monster. Honestly, the dynamic between them was the only reason I even finished this fic. I thought this story was supposed to be anchored in harry's shift to a more loving person, but the ending spits on that entire concept. You put in some shit in the epilogue about Draco that I couldn't care less about, but you don''t even include what's going on with harry and Ginny.

I wish I never read this story.
bankerrtx01 chapter 21 . 2/29
Where is the damn epologe you promised?!
Beatraoz chapter 21 . 12/30/2019
Great story! Even though it isn’t officially finished, it still has a nice ending. The way Harry has been acting throughout this story had me cringe sometimes but only because it goes against what any normal person would do, of course it makes so much sense when you look at how he was raised. He was definitely far from normal. Once again thank you for this amazing story, it is such a well-written one!
Guest chapter 21 . 9/11/2019
Great story! I've never read a story when harry was a soldier like this before and it was awesome!
Mighty Pen 20 chapter 21 . 8/25/2019
From the title and the summary I was expecting this to be a complete slice of life type, and for me to get bored of the story not even half-way through. Well, I was pleasantly surprised. It was actually quite good. Harry's robotic interactions were very funny to read and your action sequences were interesting. Well done.
Edwiges Potter chapter 21 . 8/16/2019
Why didn't you have more chapters? Epilogue?
Handers chapter 15 . 8/4/2019
The whole passage with Ron deciding how to react was very funny.
Handers chapter 14 . 8/4/2019
Nice story so far :)
I think that Harry's inability to use normal "civilian" language is too much to be believable, after all if he was that well trained he would also have been trained in understanding the way people speak to be able to gather intel efficiently.
Naelyon chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
Really? The boy who saved the wizarding world shows up suddenly, and it turns out that he's a complete sociopath and has been trained to be a human weapon, and everyone's just like "okay, that makes sense". Hermione doesn't care that Albus Dumbledore used child soldiers and Ginny thinks it's funny that he doesn't know how to smile. This is a bad start for an even wprse story.
ILickYourBigToe chapter 14 . 6/23/2019
I just made a very late connection, Harry is a lot like Spok from Start Trek in this story
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