Really intense, I love it, write more please!

That was pretty well written, aside from a few spelling errors.

Though, I believe you confused Joey's first name with his last. Jonouchi Katsuya is Joey Wheeler, and Shizuka Katsuya is Serenity Wheeler You see? So when Serenity says "I am a Jonouchi!" She was actually saying that she's a Joey.

~Elizabeth

So had she originally started this out with Ryou and Bakura took over? or was it always Bakura? I'm not certain what was trying to resurface. I'm slow, help me along? LOL

Oh I feel so sorry for Shizuka, and that Bakura is a real sick person... Good Job..

wow .. nice and kinda poetic in a sick twisted way but... when Yami bakura is concerned.. sick and twisted comes narturaly! _

COL!

fuck...i would have bet my ass it was kaiba

Wow~! I liked this!

I enjoyed this fanfic. Hope to see more of your stories in the future.

is this a oneshot?

Sorry it took so long to get back to you, I went on holiday soon after you sent me an e-mail. I added your story to the C2, I haven't read it all but it looks alright.

Damn that scared me! I was weird, throughout this whole fic I thought it was either Kaiba or Marik I didn't even think of Bakura! that gave me the chills.

That was good, I'm strating to love BakuraxShizuka a lot and I think it's because of your stories. You need to do another one

Damn I thought for sure that was Kaiba but it was Bakura! Wow that was incredible. I never thought of Screamshipping, but again you opened my eyes. You'll have to do another one, or at least a KaibaxSerenity.

If that's Kaiba...I'll kick his sorry ass!

Kaiba: *raises an eyebrow*

Kiko: Yeah, you heard me!

Update!